Need the opinion of experienced video watchers!

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This is a video I made a while ago. I want to make more in the future, but would like some feedback on this one before I do.

I need both constructive criticisms and approval of things that actually work. Suggestions are also welcome

Here it is

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9JIgJEVyw20[/youtube]