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Lillikoi
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Yesterday, 2:29 pm

'Hem. So if you have an idea that you want to incorporate in the story, put it here. 8)

And then we can talk about it.



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Yesterday, 2:32 pm

I was thinking, what if I introduced the person that Kiki was before they died?

He's basically the complete opposite of Kiki. :lol:

I don't know what he could do yet, but I think he could be a useful ally to them when they're storming Team Eon's base.

Plus, it would shed some light on who they are in the past.

Just some ideas I had written down:

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His eyes narrowed, though it seemed like no matter how he varied his expression, his voice was always a dull monotone. "...Interesting."
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"If you're looking for the potion, turn to page 53 in my second notebook. It will take me about 30 minutes to prepare."
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He glared at Kiki. "I don't believe that a terrible, crude person like you could ever be the same person as me."

Kiki chuckled. "Say that again now?"

"Go away."
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After a few minutes of studying Dan, March's face creased together like he was thinking. He tapped his pencil against his chin. "You don't require any practice at all to master your skills. The environment is just somehow.... automatically in tune with your mind."

His eyebrows creased together, in what could only be seen as a slightly disappointed expression.
"Hmmm.... I wish it was that easy where I came from."

He nodded. "But thank you. Thank you for your time."
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Kiki's eyes widened. "But.... I thought my father was a wonderful man!" they cried.

"Mine's not."
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He frowned. "I have no problems with it, but if you have any moral qualms about it, I don't have to do it," he said indifferently.
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His face turned red and he looked away as he petted the puppy.
"It's not 'cute,' but I suppose it's... pitiable."



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Yesterday, 9:45 pm

Yay, the thread is finally made!

That certainly would be interesting meeting Kiki's past incarnation. We already have time travel in the RP so it wouldn't be too insane.

Speaking of morally different versions of the same person, something I was planning about that orbital battleship is that it is commanded by the alternate version of Mason Williams and sent by the alternate Mike. I finally decided what to do with the alternate Mike, I made him evil. :twisted:

As for Mars, he is a new major character I have been working on. As mentioned in the RP he was born on Mars post-colonization and he has never been to Earth although he doesn't particularly want to either. Basically he is part of the first generation to grow up in a multi-planetary civilization where space travel is as common as air travel. He makes a living by flying his small beat up salvage ship and harvesting valuable resources from the debris left over from space battles, he is a bit more morally questionable then Mike and is the kind of person who is good at fixing things but less good at actually making things. The reason he hides his real name is because he is a wanted criminal, not for doing anything particularly bad but more because he messed with the wrong people. I actually have not come up with his real name yet. :lol:

I haven't drawn Mars yet but I have made him in the Elite Dangerous character creator thingy:

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