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Jetfox
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07 Oct 2009, 8:44 pm

ok i love kingdom hearts and all but my story i wrote and am still writing is being affected by the stuff i learned in kh days.

there are mutiple things that are completely inaccurate and i can do little to repair the story now.

the conflictions are, xemnas didn't infact want a heart, he actually seeks to control it.
saix and axel are not enemies and were once friends.
saix actually wanted to off xemnas from the begining [not sure if that's entirely true though]
xemnas cares little about his order and doesn't mind using them at will.

god only knows how kh bbs will damage my story when it comes out.

the main problem is accuracy here i'm trying to stay true to the actual story line, i failed miserably. i'm serously quiting the story at this point. till i come up with a fix for it.

the story is called the return of xemnas


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08 Oct 2009, 5:54 am

You see, that's the problem with fan-fiction in an established continuity. Sooner or later, somebody is going to usurp it.


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08 Oct 2009, 12:06 pm

yep i probably should just come up with my own story, but i can't stay true to something like that.

even my main story is within about a 100 other storylines.

i did make one story that was my own idea but i am really nervous about posting it anywhere.

so what do i do with the current story i have though? continue and and say it's an alternate universe or just give up.


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