Could someone read my fanfiction and see how I'm doing?

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DinoMongoosePenguin
Pileated woodpecker
Pileated woodpecker

Joined: 21 Aug 2015
Gender: Male
Posts: 176
Location: The NSA Knows

02 Jan 2017, 10:31 pm

My user account at Fanfiction.net is Mongoose Lover. The account is here: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5586823/Mongoose-Lover


Try and look at the ones labeled "Complete" first. (However, the Rikki-tikki-tavi 3 one that is over 100K words long WAS complete, but then I added some more to it, so look at that one too.) Also, the older the dates on the things, the less good they likely are (my writing style wasn't as good 3 years ago as it is now.)

Also, when I do roleplays, I try to work with the other person (and the other person I work with does have a learning disability or something and is a bad speller as a result and also sometimes won't make the plot like I'd like. In role plays, especially when the other guy keeps using script format, forcing me to convert it to text format every time, I cannot control what the other guy does and also it makes it harder to describe scenery, etc, if the other guy doesn't.