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Do you like my Comic?
Yes I did 27%  27%  [ 3 ]
it was ok 36%  36%  [ 4 ]
No, I didn't like it 27%  27%  [ 3 ]
it was rubbish 9%  9%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 11

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07 Nov 2007, 5:02 pm

This my chance for my comic, to get a bigger audience.

My comic has my favourite characters, mixed up my own characters having mixed adventures. It may not appeal to you but I'm crazy and vivid with imagination.


http://timelady333.deviantart.com/art/A ... 1-62040341

http://timelady333.deviantart.com/art/A ... 2-62131262

http://timelady333.deviantart.com/art/P ... s-63515582

http://timelady333.deviantart.com/art/P ... c-64516740

I only did 4 pages because it takes a long time and I have school and homework blocking me from doing this.

This thread is for discussing my comic, what needs improving (and if like my comic, so much, you might get to be a second author)

but I don't want this topic is SPAMMING, INSULTS

DISLIKE of this comic should not be discussed.

If I see these very often, I won't show you any more.


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12 Nov 2007, 11:00 am

I like the use of color, the characters I would need to learn.

Good framing, use of space, story line is only a fragment, hard to tell. Somewhat open ended,

Line, comments, universal truth is the expected flow.

Keep drawing, best way to learn.



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12 Nov 2007, 11:33 am

Sorry to disappoint, you, I'm changing the style because it quicker and a more comic like.

SPOILER

The outlines will be more thicker.


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13 Nov 2007, 4:40 pm

http://timelady333.deviantart.com/art/P ... 1-69724761

Pg 5 of the comic.


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02 Jan 2008, 4:17 pm

see my high quality comic which has a pointless story

http://timelady333.deviantart.com/art/P ... s-73108918


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02 Jan 2008, 7:48 pm

Yes, the story is like modern art, if you understand it, you don't.

Timelady deserves more than she gets, she is a modern remake of The Fly, this time getting transported with the cat, Somewhere a cat without tail, and very silly ears.

A powerful rendering style, it jumps off the page, but Sponge Bob The Doctor, The Romonovs, Count Daracula, spending the weekend with Jane Austin, seems derivitive.

I would not put my real stuff on the web, so I am sure Sponge Bob is a standin.

More Timelady, part cat, and knows how to run a can opener!

I like the colors.



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03 Jan 2008, 7:29 am

My comic is about mixed characters

like Media characters meet the Oringnal Characters, they have adventures.

My comic Publish, is based on fans liking character as celebrities.


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03 Jan 2008, 7:48 am

I like it, the strip has a cute and friendly feel to it. I enjoy all types of humor across the spectrum. Often I'll get ideas which could be used in cartoons, so I might consider being a writer (but probably not artist) for comics. The thing is, most of my ideas are either based on the absurd, weird, or tragicomic (dark and often offensive) brand of humor. But I like that stuff. I can laugh about most anything, though I do my best to be conscious of what's acceptable to others.

Here are a few web comics I've enjoyed recently which you're likely familiar with already.

http://www.xkcd.com ('nerdy humor', for the most part)
http://www.pbfcomics.com (tragicomedy, silly, adult humor)
http://irkworks.com/links.htm (I like most of the comics listed here)



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04 Jan 2008, 1:47 am

I love your comics! I'm thinking about starting my own soon.



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04 Jan 2008, 6:27 am

IdahoRose wrote:
I love your comics! I'm thinking about starting my own soon.


Show me, when you done your first page


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05 Jan 2008, 7:04 pm

Hah...well kudos for having the Psychonauts guy in there. XD I loved that game.



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26 Feb 2008, 5:19 pm

I haven't been publishing more because of the school which will die


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