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29 Apr 2018, 5:36 pm

Title:

On Repeat

Genre:

Science Fiction

Sub-Genre:


Time Travel

Logline:

Set in the near future where psychological reformation of criminals is the norm, this story follows a convicted convict named Phil who is eager to be released from prison but has to travel back in time to witness his crimes when he first committed them to prove himself to be a truly reformed person before his release.


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07 May 2018, 4:55 pm

My book, Creeping Shadows, is now in paperback!

https://www.amazon.com/dp/1718833024/re ... =bill+link


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11 Jun 2018, 3:04 pm

Title:

The Killer's Web

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Horror

Logline:

An Interpol agent is given a dangerous assignment; the assignment being the taking down of a mysterious website where serial killers from around the world brag about their crimes in graphic detail.


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11 Jun 2018, 4:56 pm

AnonymousAnonymous wrote:
Title:

The Killer's Web

Genre:

Horror

Logline:

An Interpol agent is given a dangerous assignment; the assignment being the taking down of a mysterious website where serial killers from around the world brag about their crimes in graphic detail.


Is this a new story of yours?


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12 Jul 2018, 1:06 pm

when she says she lonely shes told to look around and wake up,
but she feels alone in the crowd as though her voice is a whisper among the shouts of screaming fangirls,
and it leads her to believe that she is an uncharted island doomed to never be discovered,
so she hides behind her headphones and books which she can relate to while the rest of the world is a mystery to her



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12 Jul 2018, 1:07 pm

as though she were a kid craving sugar she craves the emptiness ,
she knows its not healthy but she gets so overwhelmed by the numbers on the scale and the amount of food on her plate each day shes scared to ask for help,
so she falls further and further down the rabbit hole,
getting gradually more and more lost as she drowns in an ocean of memories and pain that she cant escape



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12 Jul 2018, 1:08 pm

nothing seems to stay the same in life,
class after class,
grade after grade,
school after school,
new relative after new relative,
move after move,
lost friend after lost friend,
failed relationship after failed relationship,
dream after dream forgotten,
thought after thought pushed aside,
heartbreak after heartbreak ,
broke routine after broke routine,
for once can everything in time just sstay still bc i just dont know how to keep up anymore,
the clock seems to be ticking faster and faster each day,
the time just flies away ,
and im not ready to move away ..



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12 Jul 2018, 1:12 pm

There's a girl i know

Trying to smile through the pain

There's a girl i know
Biting her lip to stop the tears from falling
There's a girl i know
Blaming herself for what goes wrong
There's a girl i know
Held captive by her fears
There's a girl i know
forcing herself to eat
There's a girl i know
Laughing so nobody worries
There's a girl i know
Wishing someone would end it all



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12 Jul 2018, 1:13 pm

My nerves shatter does it really matter

Everything's a blur It's too bright my stomach turns

Closing my eyes i put my head in my heads and sounds you can't hear are driving me batty

I can't process this overwhelming world you call reality

Hearing people around me laughing makes me feel empty inside

Why is my struggle to belong so amusing

As i slowly unwind everything's coming into focus

People are standing around my desk laughing and jeering

Slowly melting into my seat wishing I hadn't broke down once again

Often on these long days i wonder why me



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12 Jul 2018, 1:14 pm

i scream and shout

finally letting my anger out

hurting everyone around me

this isnt how i want to be

standing here shaking like a leaf

i put my anger away like a sword in a sheath

no matter how i hard i try i cant seem to communicate

more frustrated than a fisher who cant get a fish to take the bait

slowly i begin to realize maybe my world isnt so lonely after all

theres people who care for me practically at my beck and call

my oh so stormy sky is only partially cloudy now

i cant believe i was oh so willing under pressure to bow

the pieces of the puzzle are slowly falling into place

im finding i have no need for an anger forged mace
my tunnel previously full of shadows now has light

the answer to my problems is no longer always flight

it seems that after all this time i may finally be able to cope

for now it appears i finally have a reason to hope



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12 Jul 2018, 1:15 pm

Dear Depression

why are you here

why do you cause everyone such a fright

i live in pure fear , fear of every little thing, now i have constant fear

Why do you keep me up crying late at night

You cause me so much suffering yet you remain unseen

like puzzle pieces scattered across the house i dont feel whole anymore

Thanks to you i feel hopelessly left out as though everyone around me were mean

you attack I spend each evening thinking why me while curled up in a ball on the floor

you make me feel so numb i do anything possible just to feel something anything at all

why cant you just leave me the hell alone

sincerely a struggling teen



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12 Jul 2018, 1:16 pm

ime and time again you said those same three words

each and every time i replied i would hesitate

no matter how hard i tried i couldnt reflect the love you felt for me

as time went on i started feeling more and more guilty

i didnt understand what was going on

there was no spark no connection no everlasting bond

you were going to throw your life away because of me breaking up with you

you were bone crushingly devastated but i felt very little else but guilt

had you broke up with me first however im not sure i would stand so strong



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12 Jul 2018, 1:17 pm

Goodbye

Get lost

Don't come back

You had your chance

Guess what you ruined it

I'm not gonna change for nobody

You kept trying to make me someone else

You wanted every second of my time

I couldn't take a second to relax

Your needs became more important than mine

That's not how a relationship works you fool

My friends all got shoved aside for you

You questioned about everyone I knew

I trusted you but all I heard were countless lies

Your stories don't add up so don't bother weaving a new tale

You didn't truly care about my needs or wants

Anytime I needed anything the focus was turned back to you

you're trapped in your own never ending pity party

Sorry but I have plans for my life I won't be attending any longer

You claim you know me you don't know s**t

Anyone who truly knows me could tell you that

You swear up and down that you care about me

If you did you wouldn't have treated me the way you did

I'm tired of your whiny ass BS

You keep saying that you love me so

But You don't even love yourself

So that can't possibly be true

You be you and I'll be me

I'm showing you the door find your way out

This is the end of our story

You don't get your happily ever after with me

Sorry not sorry

Adios



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12 Jul 2018, 1:18 pm

i might seem fine

that couldnt be further from the truth

i may look happy

but likelihood is im trying not to cry

i seem to be staring

to be honest im trying to escape from this overwhelming world you call reality

i have so many quirks

but all i see is a total freak

i may appear thin and lacking of figure

in my eyes however im far from slim

i appear to be rude

truthfully i dont know how to commmunicate properly

it seems like im choosing to do all this

thats hardly so rather im broken inside



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16 Jul 2018, 8:04 am

Kraichgauer wrote:
My book, Creeping Shadows, is now in paperback!

https://www.amazon.com/dp/1718833024/re ... =bill+link

Congratulations!



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13 Sep 2018, 5:58 pm

AnonymousAnonymous wrote:
I have been working on a film script for a long while and it is called "Pieces of Truth" which is intended to be a psychological thriller about a traumatic past experience returning to haunt a boy and a girl who bore witness to it as children.

Logline:

Brian and Alice are childhood lovers who drift apart after witnessing the grisly murder of two friends. Ten years later, they reunite in college only to have their renewed romance interrupted when they begin receiving messages from two people claiming to be their murdered childhood friends.

If you are interested, send me a PM and I will send you a copy of what I have written so far.


I finished the script a few weeks ago and now, I'm stuck coming up with a good pitch to convince an agency that my script is worthy for production.

If anyone can come up with a good pitch, I suggest reading the logline first before coming up with ideas.

As indicated, my script is called "Pieces Of Truth" and is a psychological thriller script.


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