I think the real qoestion should be; "Can you, with the materials you have at hand, tell a compelling and entertaining story on the budget you're given?" This is the central criteria for being a director.
AS may be a new 'take' on a story, but you have to project your vision in a way a general audience can understand it. It may work for one movie, maybe two, but be an artist and director first.
Ok, sat down and watched the trailer. Nice music. IMO, trailers are a brief synopsis of the action, and a way to paint the story in general terms, while showing scenes out of sequence to still interest the viewers. (think about it whenever you watch a trailer, then see the movie...
One thing about modern video is it's really fast-paced. Since Hollywood thinks we have the attention span of a gnat, a black screen lasting more than about 4 or 5 seconds will not really work. Just my opinion. Probably the audio of the characters should come in within about 10-20 seconds at most. Maybe some more explanatory words at the beginning? Music should probably pick up or change after the first 30 seconds, unless you're using it to contrast against faster-paced action.
Nothing harsh here, just saying in my opinion where I think your focus should be.
You've got a good idea here, keep working on it.
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