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I give you an 8.5. It would have been a 9.5, but you misspelled "writing" (as "writting").
Yea, writting (:P) and problably. Two words I misspell all the time. I accept my 8.5 with pride, but does spelling count? The OP said grammar, and I assumed that spelling would be included, but on reflection, considering the comorbidty of AS and dsylexia.... Not sure it's fair for all. Could OP clarify the rules please?
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It's so fun to be skipped!

And that makes twice!
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But, yeah, can I please have a rating?
Okie dokie.
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Okay, I can only remember a bit of this one, but still.
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I don't remember much, but I do remember that I had to take off my glasses and there were dinosaurs and I thought my friend was a dinosaur because I couldn't see, and I therefore proceeded to beat the friend up.
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Yeah, I hate the whole 'WE MUST EXPAND TERRITOTY' crud[...]
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Although [...] , I don't think my mother would appreciate the worried looks we got.
mmmm.... Tough one... I think I'll go with a high 8... 8.7.
tmad40blue...
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Pitch blackness.
I didn't read through the whole thing, but that's the only actual error I could find in the story, but then I'm an 8.5, and feel lucky for that much

. Some very awkward wording in many places though. From a search though (gotta be fair)...
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It's got a Core 2 Duo with 2GB of RAM.
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I know that's not possible, but still.
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(a.k.a. you can't install OS X on a PC (legally).)
Grammatically acceptable, however factually incorrect, so I took points off anyways

. (Actually, just realized "a.k.a." is not correct. "Also known as you can't install...." Should be "i.e."
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Those are the trick for me.
mmm... If "trick" is a noun there, then that's ok...?
Overall, quite good. Give you a 9.2. Your completely illogical loyalty to Apple hurt you a lot.
Boy, judging people is fun. I missed my calling
You SUCK!! ! YOU ALL SUCK!! !