Opinions on my blog?

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I'm trying to improve my writing with a blog. It's a mix of thoughts and a few stories. I'd like some constructive criticism.

http://zachspossiblynoteworthyblog.blogspot.com/

Do I write well?

How can I improve?

Anything you really like/dislike?

Yeah a very interesting blog metelz, I tend to blog for days on end then leave it for days on end myself. I wouild suggest adding images, videos and visuals to the blog but thats just a matter of personal taste. I loved the link to omegle as well I didnt ever hear about that site and after using it find it to be a nice little site. I think blogs are a great modern way of keeping a kind of journal or diary what ever suites plus well the whole of the internet is becoming blog orientated.

I will keep looking at your blog metelz and keep up the good work.

I'm just reviving this because It's been a while and I updated the blog a bit. Hope you don't mind.

your writing is ok. i like how it's straightforward .
although i noted that there were some run-on (overly long) sentencees in places. especially in the one pertaining to exchange students.
there were places where i felt periods might've been more appropriate than commas.
but other than that, seemed good.

mind looking at mine? there's a link in my signature
i could always use another critic.