any chemists out there?

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I'm writing a graphic novel for my daughter because she likes them and most of the ones for girls are stupid.

I'm trying to write something that will be educational as well as entertaining but I'm having a perfectionist hurdle I can't get past and I was wondering if there was anyone out there whose special interest is chemistry who wouldn't mind letting me ask a few questions so I can build a scientifically plausible story.

I know I could rely on magic to solve all my problems, but when I asked her if she wanted all science, all magic or a blend of both, she said a blend and I can't bring myself to circumvent science with magic if the magic ruins the science, if that makes sense.

what do you want the science/magic to do? There was a 4-book series (the Darkness Series) by Harry Turtledove, where they treated magic as science...
Give us some ideas, and the real chemists can step in and tell you what you want to know...all I know is it's acid to water, not the other way around...

thanks pakled. you do have a point that unless I explain what I want to do, no one will have any idea how to help me.

my hope is to introduce the practical uses of the periodic table and a basic understanding of molecules even if I have to invent a molecule or alloy to make it interesting. I need to invent a substance that will release energy with only a little physical force and is not radioactive. ideally it would be crystalline in structure (which is why I was leaning toward magic in the first place, because I'm pretty sure there is no actual structure that will accommodate me).

I suppose I could just make something up, but it feels wrong to do it. I'd like to lead my daughter into an appreciation for science. I myself was actively discouraged while in middle school from pursuing science so I'm woefully ignorant of even basic chemistry.

I'm not sure why my post was moved to this section. my question doesn't really have anything to do with art, writing, and music although the larger context of my project does.

(edited to add: the nice moderator who moved my thread here also linked to it from the science forum, so now it makes absolute sense that it was moved!)

I have so many questions to ask but first I'd better understand the basics of the types of energy (radioactice, chemical) and the effects of their release. maybe I can be more coherent once I've grasped those.

thanks for setting me on a track!

oh yeah! I love it when Mythbusters blow stuff up with thermite. I forgot all about thermite. I could never be an explosives expert, I guess.

more to add to my reading list! Sand, you are a font of information.

I'm feeling a bit obsessed with thermite now....

Lead and acid can make a decent battery, which is an electrochemical reactor.
I remember using lemon juice as the acid, soaked up in cloth, with two
sheets of lead on either side, and after charging it made 2 volts that ran a LED
flashlight and maybe a motor for an impressive time. It has to be reasonably
pure lead though.

If I recall correctly, EPSOM SALT will dehydrate if cooked.
It will then get hot when it is dripped on.
It may get TOO HOT, so be careful.
Other things do that too, I'm not sure about baking soda.
Copper Sulfate does if you can find it.

A certain allegedly dangerous compound nh2no3 gets COLD instead.
But COLD is not energy. Might be useful for peltier junctions as a
source of electricity activated by water, since those are thermoelectric.

Quartz crystals are piezoelectric. I am not sure if they are what's used
in grill start buttons, which make small but very shocking sparks.
Rochelle salt is also piezoelectric but I have no idea where it comes from.
I think it is used in those brass discs in musical greeting cards , but they
also generate electricity with vibration, no where near enough to
shock or do useful work though.

Google the formula for lightsticks. All I remember is oxalic acid (poison!)
and fluorescent ink but there is one more ingredient at least.

Magic wand = magnet + magnetic switch (reed relay, etc) or something else

Highlighter pen on yellow surface = blacklight activated invisible ink

Verdigris (green rust on old copper wire etc) makes candle fire blue-green

Magnets can be used for fake PK effects

Laser pointers look like jedi lightsabers in smoke or fog

LED light bulbs and coin batteries (Radio Shack), placed under a glasses of liquid
can look magical or radioactive.

Sheets of glow in the dark stuff can be drawn on or written on with blue LEDs,
temporarily.

There is a magneticorheological(?) fluid made of oil and metal particles,
which looks like a weird alien creature when it is in a plate and a magnet
is moved under the plate.

A strong magnet falls very slowly through a copper pipe.

I'll post if I think of any more. Sorry I know more electricity than chemistry.
If that's OK then I can think of a lot more.

wow, you are full of fun facts!

piezoelectric crystals might actually be what I want. I don't understand the math at all, but if I can get a basic grasp on how it works, it would solve all my problems.

more research!! !

thanks ValMikeSmith!

I am really very happy right now. I have no one to talk to about these things except my husband and he is totally into it but not a chemist so can only give me suggestions sometimes, so you guys really rock for giving me so much information.

You have an interesting task ahead of you. I am a writer with significant chemistry background and have attempted something similar. The key (which you seem to have a handle on) is assessing your target audience in order to get the right blend of scientific plausibility with story value. You can get so deep into the science that you'll get high marks from your local chemistry professor but put your kid to sleep in a sea of equations and factoids. For a very young audience I would almost go the opposite route - let it all be magic and stay vague about the science In order to tell a better story. In fact that works for all ages from the literary standpoint - Tolkien never even tried to address the science of invisibility regarding the One Ring, but I love those books and the chemist in me doesn't care at all how it worked.
But I understand your desire to find a middle ground, and like I said I've tried. I abandoned the project I started, unable to really decide who my audience was going to be.
I've always been fascinated by oxidizers and spontaneously combustible substances. Alkali metals react furiously with water, in some cases causing an explosion (lithium, sodium, potassium, rubidium, cesium). Chlorates are tricky and unstable. They do not burn per se, but heat will decompose them - and they give off pure oxygen, which will violently feed any fire already in progress. Chlorates mixed with any finely divided fuel or contaminant (powdered metals, hydrocarbons, ammonium compounds, sawdust or leaf litter) become a spontaneously combustible mixture, which can ignite due to friction or even too much exposure to ultraviolet light. Contaminated chlorates have been responsible for many a fireworks factory explosion. A shock sensitivity scale was established by chemists a long time ago for various explosives. They were rated on how easily they exploded when beaten by a hammer against an anvil. The most sensitive explosive on this scale was a mixture of barium chlorate and picric acid (trinitrophenol), which is nearly as unstable as the nitrogen triiodide previously mentioned.
H.P. Lovecraft wrote a short horror story involving astronauts in which their use of potassium chlorate cubes to generate oxygen inside the space suit was a plausible plot device. I forget the name of the story though.

This might interest you. http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/20 ... 131802.htm

thanks for sharing your experience, dtoxic. I'm a bit enamored with the combustibles but to make my daughter happy I'm going to have to settle for magic. she came up with a flawless logical argument as to why I should do so, and I'm currently unable to refute her argument with anything other than "but.... but.... science is cool!".

still, I'm going to work some elementary chemistry in somehow. I haven't read up on the piezoelectric effect yet, still thinking it might give me a way to introduce some concepts at least. I'll just keep working on the story and reading about the things that have been tossed my way. so many good ideas!

I know exactly who my target audience is, so I have a bit of an advantage I think, plus I have an in-house creative consultant who's not at all shy about telling me whether she likes my work or thinks it's lame she's been giving her stamp of approval to the story-line the whole way until we hit the science vs. magic bump.

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OMG Sand that article is so cool! I didn't see the link until I had written the above.

This item from Slashdot might interest you.

"Scientists at the University of Wisconsin-Madison have discovered that a mix of zinc oxide crystals, water, and noise pollution can efficiently produce hydrogen without the need for a dirty catalyst like oil. To generate the clean hydrogen, researchers produced a new type of zinc oxide crystals that absorb vibrations when placed in water. The vibrations cause the crystals to develop areas with strong positive and negative charges — a reaction that rips the surrounding water molecules and releases hydrogen and oxygen. The mechanism, dubbed the piezoelectrochemical effect, converts 18% of energy from vibrations into hydrogen gas (compared to 10% from conventional piezoelectric materials), and since any vibration can produce the effect, the system could one day be used to generate power from anything that produces noise — cars whizzing by on the highway, crashing waves in the ocean, or planes landing at an airport."