gailryder17 wrote:
There's not much of a plot in here yet. We need to make more. Hmm, gonna need a little help
What if this woman was an evil person, who created a disease that made all of the children sick, then, she tells them she knows how to make them better but she needs gold to buy it, so all the kids are forced to dig for her gold. After much digging she makes a fortune, but she lets all of the kids die. because what it is is shes trying to develop technology to bring her own son back to life, who was autistic, and Nts set him on fire and killed him. that actually did happen once not too long ago, an autistic kid being burned to death by NTs. what do you think?