Can I make a story out of this dream?

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23 Jun 2011, 12:51 pm

I had some odd dream. The first thing I remember is me and a bunch of others sitting by a fence, staring down while some authority (it slightly made me think of Planet of the Apes) were passing us by. Some conversation about gold went on about how some dug for gold. I asked if there was any here, another said no, but there was some around another location next to/under something that looked like a satellite or a lookout post and said something about "indians" hanging around there. There were other parts of a dream I don't remember, but it jumped to me being under that place with my friend (I knew her in real life, we went to school together for two years) overlooking a staircase. She warned me not to go down too far. I went down a few flights and saw sick children hanging around there (their appearances somewhat frightened me) and knew not to go down any further. Later I learned that a woman there was building something that in the dream was known as a "morgue" (I didn't know what it was either in the dream or real life). That place was full of sick kids. Later, there was an assembly line that some of the sick kids would be living with the healthy kids "above the stairs" and the healthy kids were mad because they didn't want to get sick. I was constantly trying to be away from them.

I wonder if we can make an interesting plot from this.


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23 Jun 2011, 1:58 pm

Sounds like a good plot already to me. Very viscerally moving.



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23 Jun 2011, 2:36 pm

There's not much of a plot in here yet. We need to make more. Hmm, gonna need a little help


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23 Jun 2011, 2:56 pm

gailryder17 wrote:
There's not much of a plot in here yet. We need to make more. Hmm, gonna need a little help

What if this woman was an evil person, who created a disease that made all of the children sick, then, she tells them she knows how to make them better but she needs gold to buy it, so all the kids are forced to dig for her gold. After much digging she makes a fortune, but she lets all of the kids die. because what it is is shes trying to develop technology to bring her own son back to life, who was autistic, and Nts set him on fire and killed him. that actually did happen once not too long ago, an autistic kid being burned to death by NTs. what do you think?



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23 Jun 2011, 3:13 pm

bradt4ever, you've been stalking me :shameonyou: :wink: (I actually don't care. But three cheers for stalking because it seems to be common now thanks to Facebook) anyway, let's take this up a notch

there was once an outbreak of some weird disease that doesn't affect mature subjects (it's artificially made but the truth's been swept under the rug) years back but they manage to keep it under control by quarantining people underground (the place beneath the stairs). I wonder how we'll incorporate gold later on. Anyway, those kept underground are given poor conditions so they have no hope of getting better (no way of keeping clean, low and sporadic food supply).

Hmmm....


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23 Jun 2011, 3:20 pm

gailryder17 wrote:
bradt4ever, you've been stalking me :shameonyou: :wink: (I actually don't care. But three cheers for stalking because it seems to be common now thanks to Facebook) anyway, let's take this up a notch

there was once an outbreak of some weird disease that doesn't affect mature subjects (it's artificially made but the truth's been swept under the rug) years back but they manage to keep it under control by quarantining people underground (the place beneath the stairs). I wonder how we'll incorporate gold later on. Anyway, those kept underground are given poor conditions so they have no hope of getting better (no way of keeping clean, low and sporadic food supply).

Hmmm....


hahaha, no im not stalking you im just extremely chatty and your the only on who ever replies back to anything i write on other peoples posts haha, i do the same thing to my friends on facebook. and i like where your going with that, maybe the people underground find gold and somehow secretly sell it for money to get medical supplies without the lady knowing it?



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23 Jun 2011, 3:27 pm

However, the public is ignorant of what goes on Beneath the Stairs....

The issue is, how would they sell it if they're never allowed Above the Stairs? That's where the people Above The Stairs who want to know more come in...

DUH DUH DUH!! !! (dramatic music)


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23 Jun 2011, 3:38 pm

gailryder17 wrote:
However, the public is ignorant of what goes on Beneath the Stairs....

The issue is, how would they sell it if they're never allowed Above the Stairs? That's where the people Above The Stairs who want to know more come in...

DUH DUH DUH!! !! (dramatic music)


This is going great! well, the way i see it, the lady needs to sleep eventually, and someone would need to make sure she doesnt wake up while someone tries to go upstairs



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23 Jun 2011, 3:59 pm

Now, when do we start writing?


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23 Jun 2011, 4:26 pm

gailryder17 wrote:
Now, when do we start writing?


You mean you actually want my help writing this? Wow! ive never had that happen before :), if your sure you want me to write it with you, then anytimes good, so where do you wanna write this?



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23 Jun 2011, 4:27 pm

Another "new" thread


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