Very neat tidy poem. Deceptively simple yet says a lot without having to explain. Like the idea about collective dreaming, and I guess they would do something like that.
I tried to think of a poetic reply . I thought about their diet. They eat scorpians - well ,the closest half-rhyme I came up with was ,
eat scorpians- Richard Dawkins.
Not sure it works. Yours is much more precise.