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19 May 2012, 3:25 pm

This is a song I produced with FL Studio. My alias is Sinicizm What do you think of it?

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TFISO0ZC9uk&feature=plcp[/youtube]



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19 May 2012, 3:51 pm

Cool. I like the fact you alternate the length of each section: the standard 8 bars in the beginning then it vacillates between 6 bars and 10 bars. Keeps the listener on his toes!



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19 May 2012, 4:33 pm

Well it is certainly better than a lot of stuff I have heard! It isn't really my style though.

My only critical input would be that it sounded really repetitive, and the background rhythm seemed unnecessary and distracting.