Poetry of Mine

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Title: Emotions of a person with Asperger's Syndrome and Autism
When I first met
There were these feelings of friendship
Slowly these feelings change
Was it because of your hair
Or was it your eyes
Or was it something else completey
The feelings' change is still unknown
Why do these feelings exist
Even more what are these feelings of
Are they of love or of understanding
Will they create happiness
or create hatred and fear
Such confusion is created by these feelings


Title: Beauty of the Beholder
You eyes are like diamonds
That are so beautiful
But yet fragile and gentle
Your hair is like silk
That is so smooth and soft
Your lips are like roses
That are so gorgeous
But yet fragile and smooth
All of which has bewitched me
To be yours

Title: Emptiness of the Soul
There is one heart, one being
This one being can be full of anything
Happiness
Sorrow
Fear
Anger
Sadness
Hatred
Joyfulness and kindness
But there something that always
A link that can not be held forever
This something is not love but forgiveness
The ability to let something go from past actions
Sins can be forgiven over time
But can you forgive for something
Can something be easily forgotten
Will everything be forgiven
Only you decide the final faith of destiny
Be faithful and kind to all


Title: Citizenship
What is citizenship
Citizenship is love
Citizenship is friendship
Citizenship is kindness
Citizenship are actions
Citizenship are morals
Citizenship are rights and wrongs
We decide what citizenship is
Is citizenship to you is the same to him or her
What you fight for is that citizenship
Can citizenship be earned through fighting
Citizenship is the hardships we face
Citizenship is our suffering to succeed
Citizenship is our success to be all we can be
For in the end, citizenship can makes us heroes
But how can we be heroes
It just happens to be something that can not be stop
We all have a heroic citizen in all of us
We are the world

Keep it up, man. It helps to process the world from a safe, isolated place like on a piece of paper as long as you keep your words true.

I like your style of poetry. The patterns, the words. I especially liked citizenship.

I wrote most of them this year. I write what I feel basically.

What are you looking for people to respond to this thread with? Are you just putting it out there so people can enjoy it, or do you want criticism, or what?

Ah. See for me poetry is as much an experiment as it is the feeling in your heart.

I write often very cold, black poetry from the viewpoint of killers and rapists and other unpleasant things. They're just studies of the human condition. I also write politically motivated stuff.

However I also write emotional stuff too, which really is just writing out what I feel.

If you write from your heart then you have a heart of a writer.

Day of Affection

The day has come
The day that I admit
I will admit on this day
My love for you
My emotions for you
My affection for you
Though we are distant from each other
My still calls out for you
We were meant to be together forever
True love tells all