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ASandproud
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20 Sep 2008, 11:15 am

These are some really good poems Social, especially "Rain" and "Escape". Those two in particular display a real talent for rhythmic prose. Keep it up!! !


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27 Sep 2008, 5:49 pm

Wow! I really enjoy your poems Fantom; they are so relatable. I like the style of the first ones, they read easy. You should write more. :D Maverick is perhaps my favorite of the bunch.


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