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17 Jan 2009, 5:23 am

I write poems sometimes, it seems to be the only way I can communicate my feelings. I wrote a poem for a girl I met online about three years ago and I am waiting on a response, I have never been this nervous about anything. Here is the poem I wrote her.

sethzack wrote:

my most heartfelt poem yet:
your randomness and way with words, i find normality is for the birds.
the way you write is music to my eyes, when you're sad i imagine an angel cries.
i care for you more than any other girl, when im writing to you my toes sometimes curl.
if only i could express exactly how i feel, i give you my heart no longer cold and made of steel.
you're strong willed and dont hold back, i think i love you, yours truly... sethzack.

I wrote it without correct punctuation because I only feel the need to do that here. :lol:

I am definitely a little different...
I also rambled a lot and I couldn't help myself, I really hope she doesn't freak out about it.

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17 Jan 2009, 5:56 am

Don't talk about her tits is my advice. My interest didn't like it at all and eventually told a teacher. Now that teacher said I have to sit away. :cry:

I also had a fake pic of Sasha that looked like her on my Facebook which I had to delete because it was the right thing.

Would you say that was a bit over obsessive?

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17 Jan 2009, 6:03 am

TheEvolutionOfLife wrote:

Don't talk about her tits is my advice. My interest didn't like it at all and eventually told a teacher. Now that teacher said I have to sit away. :cry:

I also had a fake pic of Sasha that looked like her on my Facebook which I had to delete because it was the right thing.

Would you say that was a bit over obsessive?

That is great advice I guess...

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17 Jan 2009, 8:19 am

I think it's sweet, honest, and harmless.

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17 Jan 2009, 9:18 am

sunshower wrote:

I think it's sweet, honest, and harmless.

Thank you, I hope she feels the same.

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17 Jan 2009, 9:35 am

Wish you the best of luck.

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17 Jan 2009, 9:36 am

Tias wrote:

Wish you the best of luck.

Thank you, even though luck has never really been on my side I appreciate that.

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17 Jan 2009, 3:56 pm

TheEvolutionOfLife wrote:

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Don't talk about her tits is my advice. My interest didn't like it at all and eventually told a teacher. Now that teacher said I have to sit away. :cry:

Agreed.

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17 Jan 2009, 4:08 pm

sethzack wrote:

When I read this, I skimmed through it and the 3rd and 4th lines blended...

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i care for you more than any other girl, when im writing to you my toes sometimes curl.
if only i could express exactly how i feel, i give you my heart no longer cold and made of steel.

And I had to double-take because for a second I swear I read:

Quote:

if only for you more than how I feel, i give writing to you my toad of steel

And I was about to say that I wasn't homosexual, but then I did a double-take...

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17 Jan 2009, 4:26 pm

Nice work, I hope it goes well for you.

Anyone who has put their heart on the line this way is rooting for you, it takes some nerve to do something like this!

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17 Jan 2009, 7:31 pm

ToadOfSteel wrote:

sethzack wrote:

When I read this, I skimmed through it and the 3rd and 4th lines blended...

Quote:

i care for you more than any other girl, when im writing to you my toes sometimes curl.
if only i could express exactly how i feel, i give you my heart no longer cold and made of steel.

And I had to double-take because for a second I swear I read:

Quote:

if only for you more than how I feel, i give writing to you my toad of steel

And I was about to say that I wasn't homosexual, but then I did a double-take...

That is interesting... did you get enough sleep?

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17 Jan 2009, 7:33 pm

Pugly wrote:

Nice work, I hope it goes well for you.

Anyone who has put their heart on the line this way is rooting for you, it takes some nerve to do something like this!

Thank you, I have never felt so vulnerable and exposed in my life. It is exciting and scary, I never would have done this if I didn't truly think she could be the one.

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17 Jan 2009, 7:34 pm

sethzack wrote:

That is interesting... did you get enough sleep?

Apparently not... My mind tends to do that when sleep-deprived...

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17 Jan 2009, 7:36 pm

ToadOfSteel wrote:

sethzack wrote:

That is interesting... did you get enough sleep?

Apparently not... My mind tends to do that when sleep-deprived...

I thought so, mine does too.

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17 Jan 2009, 7:48 pm

Well here is my first update on the matter, she won't talk to me at te moment. I really screwed up, I need to learn to control my thoughts from spewing out of me. I'm just gonna go to sleep and hope this all turns out to be a dream. :cry:

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17 Jan 2009, 7:50 pm

ToadOfSteel wrote:

sethzack wrote:

if only for you more than how I feel, i give writing to you my toad of steel

And I was about to say that I wasn't homosexual, but then I did a double-take...

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