Write a Line for Lyrics

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Hey every one, it's Blake again. let me start by saying this is almost a replica of the post: Write a line for a poem(http://www.wrongplanet.net/postt115148.html). and I thought how awesome that post was, and I need help with 2 songs i'm writing, well.. to get it right.. i've written the songs and almost finished them, I just need some lyrics to add to them. So, how it works: Every one posted 1 or 2 lines of their own little poem they have made, and when it is all done. after some time.. i'll post the song up.
of course we are gonna need to mash it up a little.. I was hopeing to have the lyrics nice and soft, very nice and lovely.
So thax very much to Magnus for comming up with this idea, and lets start.
I've already got a title for 1, it's skipping alone. so we will do that one first..
Here is what I got:

Baby if you took 1 minute to look at me.
Maybe you; Could see what’s happening

By posting on the topic you are giving rights and ownership of your work to me, just to make sure that every one knows that, and if you just want to show your work and do not want it in my song, just pust in brackets (Not For Song)

Baby if you took 1 minute to look at me.
Maybe you; Could see what’s happening

Baby if you could feel my heart pounding,
You'd see, we beat to the same tune.

To suggest something going on from this:

Honey, if you'd open your eyes and look at me,
look down at your hand and find a ring,

honey, if you'd just reach out with that hand,
go with me to the sun, to the moon,
just me and you.