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Jediyoda
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02 Sep 2011, 3:30 am

Hello everyone I hope Ive posted this in the right area. I love to write poems and write songs I have be writing songs and poems for many years and thought I would share a few with you all I find I can express myself alot better instead of face to face on paper.

My World

A tree stands alone on a deserted plain,
A forest ever growing,
A drop of rain,
Time stands still in this world of mine, Slow it maybe, like doing a mime,
I cannot see out you cannot see in,
Its my world I wont let you in,
A beach with sand and water so blue, I sit on that beach enjoying the view,
A place I feel safe, my comfort zone, A place to relax, A place I call my own,
So the next time you see me sitting all alone, looking like a zombie, spaced out like a drone, don't be afraid, concerned or affended, I am in my a place where I am accepted.

By Annette.



BrandonSP
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02 Sep 2011, 10:30 am

Very beautiful poem that I can relate to. Is this supposed to describe how we aspies are said to live in our own little worlds?


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02 Sep 2011, 10:47 am

Thanks for sharing : )



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02 Sep 2011, 2:04 pm

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A place I feel safe, my comfort zone, A place to relax, A place I call my own,
So the next time you see me sitting all alone, looking like a zombie, spaced out like a drone, don't be afraid, concerned or affended, I am in my a place where I am accepted.


I just had a walk alone in a park and a man came towards me. He asked me if I'm alright. I suppose I stared like a psychopath or like a drug addict because I was lost in my thoughts; my own world.