What do you think of these lyrics I wrote?

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sometimes i just wanna cry
i look around
i look around

sometimes
i just wanna change
the world around me

i don't like
exactly what i see

if you would come with me
we could make everything perfect

if i came with you all
we could have a perfect world

well i just want to understand

what is the meaning?

seems like i don't know

does anyone really know?

somtimes i just wanna cry, i look around

somtimes, i just wanna cry, i look around, i look around

and sometimes i just want to be saved

sometimes i just want to be saved

and then it happened

saved by something

I like "if i came with you all/we could have a perfect world" and I like the last two lines, they're very hopeful.