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donnie_darko
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06 Nov 2012, 2:17 am

What do you think? :D

http://soundcloud.com/mimzymusic/possem ... -the-bills



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06 Nov 2012, 10:51 am

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IOtHq5YNx1s[/youtube]



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10 Nov 2012, 8:22 am

You guys think I got flow?



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10 Nov 2012, 8:59 am

Sorry man, I don't think you're skilled at it, but that doesn't mean you should stop making the music, instead go on, practice makes perfect.

I used to be an amateur human beatboxer, but out of suckage I ditched the hobby, seems like I wasn't making any progress at all, I was 100% UNFIT.



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10 Nov 2012, 12:17 pm

Sounds like really bad nerd rap. You really need to work on the confidence in your voice, or finding a voice to be confident in. Try activating your tone more, you're too quiet and tame, and the way your flow is sounds robotic. The rhymes as a whole are understandably mediocre, but keep practicing.


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10 Nov 2012, 3:10 pm

Sounds from 1:16 are really annoying. Your voice is ok, though.


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