Writing about feelings between characters

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Do you find it difficult to write about how one character feels about another? Or about how a character feels when certain things happen to them?

I wonder if my writing suffers from being devoid of, or has too little of, thoughts of feelings or subtle indications of how a character is feeling.

Things like: "She folded her arms and turned away from him." - That could mean she felt uncomfortable, or was trying to hide her reaction etc.

Do you wonder if your writing suffers from a lack of feeling? And if so what do you do to fix it?

I've found that quite often yes, my writing is just on facts and no feelings are really described. I find it helps to ask someone else what they would feel in the given situation, so you can add this to your writing

That's a good idea. Often thought I wonder if its best to leave it to the reader. Perhaps imply the feelings by describing an action, however subtle, that would signal their feelings.

Obvious examples are:

He clenched his teeth - to indicate anger or pain
She passed a hand through her hair - to indicate flirtation or boredom

I also worry that I do not give any depth to my characters. I often do not see them as having defining memories or hopes for the future.