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E7ernal
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27 Feb 2007, 11:28 am

The deepest reaches of my mind,
Subconcious thoughts of suicide,
Car crashes and cyanide,
BANG!
Smoke rises, I fall on to my side.

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Something I put together in my mind on the journey to school.

I still can't think of how to end it though

EDIT: Thanks to skafather84 for the inspiration for the ending



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skafather84
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27 Feb 2007, 2:23 pm

E7ernal wrote:
The deepest reaches of my mind,
Subconcious thoughts of suicide,
Car crashes and cyanide

-----------------------------------------------------------------

Something I put together in my mind on the journey to school.

I still can't think of how to end it though



bang.



skafather84
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27 Feb 2007, 10:55 pm

E7ernal wrote:
The deepest reaches of my mind,
Subconcious thoughts of suicide,
Car crashes and cyanide,
BANG!
Smoke rises, I fall on to my side.

-----------------------------------------------------------------

Something I put together in my mind on the journey to school.

I still can't think of how to end it though

EDIT: Thanks to skafather84 for the inspiration for the ending


much love, i like it (and liked it before my suggestion, too :P ).

:)