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27 Sep 2019, 4:16 am

^ this last one is really good, professional standard.

Don't you drive yourself nuts thinking in rhyme all day, or is it fun?

Do you get live?



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27 Sep 2019, 11:23 am

domineekee wrote:
^ this last one is really good, professional standard.

Don't you drive yourself nuts thinking in rhyme all day, or is it fun?

Do you get live?


I mostly think of lyrics when I'm at work and bored, so not really. My job is really menial, so there isn't much thought involved. I just pull out an MP3 player and record bars as notes for myself. It's fun and slightly addictive, something about stringing them together seems to make my brain release dopamine.


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27 Oct 2019, 12:41 am

i'm half-retarded, autistic with psychotic symptoms
it's statistical probability that'll become an alcoholic, drug addict
just another tragic statistic the result of every night blizt'd
my mental is twisted;
it takes a whole chemistry set plus spirits before my spirits are lifted
how can doubly-exceptional be considered half-gifted?
if my potential is wasted, i might as well stay wasted
i understand consequence but can't execute simple tasks
and just smoke cess and pop pills to relax

don't try to resist; life never gave me s**t
that's why i'm snatching this or serving lead facelifts
Frank Grimes has got the muscle to lift and the wit to grift
serving up clips to all these dipshits

i'm high and insid'a maternal wife, plugged in like external device
you sure he won't find out? i'm worried he might
he's doing the whole constable's life, allergic to vice
while he's f*****g working, i'm squirtng inside his wife
b***h keep f*****g working, f**k make it worth it


my slang's dope enough to cause an overdose
might be mentally comatose but my days are never boring -
- i'm eating oranges with a gorgeous Georgian historian

still turnt, i stay bent, a scruffy-faced nerfherder whenever i'm earnt
i keep the herb burnt to my keep my nerves numb to hurt
and my mind races from drugs with more words than books

i feel like a flak jacket the way i'm taking rounds
my brain storms deep enough to make you drown

now hold my beer and watch this imma'bouta get more obnoxious than piece of s**t bosses when they make you stay late at the office
lyrically i'm the hardest oddest artist on this here to start s**t i get dumb quick and put hot metal where yah heart is
my dome's sick - come on son think, i might in an instant snap quick and act like i'm john wick
imma dipshit delinquent misfit i must admit my flow's quick, my dome's sick and i know tricks who know tricks

f**k, buddy; i've got no buddies or fuck-buddies
f**k my luck i ain't got nobody, it's always the same - wrong no matter which way you rub me
i represent kids who ate glue and kids who sniffed glue
and people who never grew up without a f*****g clue
i'm hanging with Fabian fags, swallowing paper tabs like labial scabs and then i think to myself man acid's rad

i'm just saying, i'm a sadist -
- whether with blades or with lyrics created -
- and my oral cadance -
i am the oddest autist artist don't even get me started
a lyrical alien who can rhyme of the top with pygmalion
i'm creative and never failin' to fill up pages
i never lack for metaphor, my mind shines bright like a semaphor light
louis cyphre, war wager, rap crusader - i gotta trife life major
never owned a cellphone or even a pager


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27 Oct 2019, 4:37 am

Rhyming with it and ic is a slippery slope that tends to steer the MC into nasty territories such as violence, ie, hit, rip, kick, clip etc.
Then onto,
"dick",
as in what the MC is becoming after talking too much
"s**t".

Tricky ground to stand on.

You did quite well.

I prefer your,

"arti-fi'shall-food-dyes-make-every-poop-a-soo'prise"

And think that there is more mileage in taking the audience on off piste musings, avoiding rabbit holes along the way.



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27 Oct 2019, 2:21 pm

domineekee wrote:
Rhyming with it and ic is a slippery slope that tends to steer the MC into nasty territories such as violence, ie, hit, rip, kick, clip etc.
Then onto,
"dick",
as in what the MC is becoming after talking too much
"s**t".

Tricky ground to stand on.

You did quite well.

I prefer your,

"arti-fi'shall-food-dyes-make-every-poop-a-soo'prise"

And think that there is more mileage in taking the audience on off piste musings, avoiding rabbit holes along the way.


I'm pretty comfortable delving into violence when I write, I've written and played death metal before. :lol:


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27 Oct 2019, 2:30 pm

You have a lot of fun don't you? :lol:



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27 Oct 2019, 2:36 pm

domineekee wrote:
You have a lot of fun don't you? :lol:


I try to, this is where I get to be what I'd like instead of what I'm expected to be. :twisted:


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