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19 Jun 2020, 6:56 am

you can add on if you want...here are some old rhymes to get started



yo the game mine, summon demons when i spray rhymes
travel through portals and break time
i leave corpses on the floor like Michael did
your whole head explode when the rifle hit
thats why life's a b1tch
im the defenition of what cypher is
my flow sick, so slick
my soul lit, define what cold is
smoke piff, bury your corpse under stone bricks
wont quit, break their bones and claim the throne
16's like when grenades explode
yall fake im dope, yall hate im hope
my state unknown
source of the cure like where haze is grown
made from the blood of the sages clone
change the tone, a slave that broke the chains alone
the great divine, scribble lyrics on every page i find
made to shine, spit a verse and cage your mind
yall rhyme like fake kids, i shine like Ma$e did
yall politicians get high and rape pigs
my mind what change is
tryna stay sane, brain's in a strange state
page plain, fill you with nails like that Quake game
Cain slain, this the same pain i maintain
evolve your style you stay the same way
embrace the grey days, im the light when the sun shine
battle me ill end your life with a punchline
im the angel of light, i conquer man
my thoughts are banned
raw bars leave claw marks like monster cans
never needed twitter, rip through your spleen and liver
gonna be awake for a while cuz the speed is bitter
you weak im sicker
you cant relate cuz what i see is bigger
murdered my ex now the sea is with her
the evil spitta, blessed like a Jesus picture
yall lack knowledge of the great lessons
never battle the beast with a fake weapon
ill make your lungs collapse like snake venom
if you never known hell you gonna hate heaven
frail peasants, tryna steal my shine
im the opposite of feeble lines, the deepest mind
speak in rhyme, burning lyrics i wont be needing mine
i feast and dine, on the screaming souls the demons find


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17 Jul 2020, 12:04 pm



yo my flow insane, i know the pain
i own the day, the lyrics cold and froze your brain
dont even battle no more im on another level
just need drugs to settle, with thugs and devils till im dead and drunk in heaven
im schooling rappers
my verse is fluid acid
god in the flesh im proof it happens
white page my pen spewing blackness, that removes the wackness
my music’s savage
it’s the screams of the dying through a gloomy passage
...sickest flow...
everything i spit is gold
im extraterrestrial you just missing home
i made excalibur lift from stone
ill split your soul...leave it banished with satan
im the dopest vet you pose no threat and cant damage the sacred
im the god any holy scripture define
my lyrics rip through your mind
still no one iller than i
the craziest one
im from the alien race that invaded the sun
straight for the head when im aiming the gun
the sickest around like when shady was young
my rap's a gat...my raps impact
like the edge of a battle axe
swung at your skull till it cracks the back
leave your brain exposed ill spit a sacred flow
that'll enter your blood stream and make your veins explode
my skillz shine with its own gravitational field
demonic statements breaking the shield
pull your mask off and satan's revealed
no one touching my cypher flow
try and get your head rocked like a sniper's foe
dismantle your corpse and strike your soul
with the energy and speed of a lightning bolt
been through the savage days, mastered the magic ways
my weakest style is dragon flames
im limitless i smashed the chains
my bars will slash and flay
any rapper's face like a dagger's blade
anyone who know me say the violence built him
cuz i like throwing people off the highest building
no more gangsta lines i stopped that
but you wont be seen no more when the glock claps
no more emo lines im not showing my thoughts
i descend the heavens after flowing with gods
your nicest verse im nicer than that
brought back divine messages the finder of facts
you could never handle the best
i keep the cannibals fed
an ancient angel wrapped in animal flesh
you not on my level, my verse solid like the form of metal
i dwell beyond the realm of gods and devils
look...my verse is nice...
ill swallow the sun and leave eternal night
yeah...my bars is best...
ill recite 'em and let the sound waves scar your flesh
i carry the sickest flow vicious dope
slitting throats, my verse colder and brighter than winter's snow
yo im causing the winter
turn from prophet to killer, from honest to sinner
they say im neo, bullets fast but im stopping 'em quicker
your flow is dumb plain
my flow is thrown and swung blades
nothing but heat like focused sun rays
you dont understand what verbal is
my verse is bricks, grab mics with the intention to murder kids
torture people like the churches did
prepare the fire for that virgin witch
im predator cloak i bend light, your vibration tense i sense fright
64 bars let the pen write, 64 scars leave your flesh sliced


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18 Jul 2020, 12:31 am

Good to see you're writing bars again.

Let me know if you ever try to record a verse, I can offer a bit of insight into mixing/producing. :nerdy:


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18 Jul 2020, 2:14 am

thanks man!...here are some song ive already recorded https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... tent=songs


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11 Aug 2020, 3:38 am



you the worthless type
my verse is bright cuz every word ignites
been sinning since my birth in life
so im on my knees praying in the church at night
the curse i write
will freeze the beat and burn the mic
and i stay fly like a bird in flight
you want a verbal fight?
battle me and end up in a hearse tonight
my venom is pure the energy raw
i enter the core
my weapons the typ used for ending a war
my message the law my verse is the coldest
battle me your ash in a urn when the flow hits
my flow is the one
these lines too cold for your lungs
you smoke? im dope in the blunt, the green shade
a dream phase, im the ocean yall sea waves


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01 Dec 2020, 10:43 am



its cause and effect
these days i feel surrounded by zombies like dawn of the dead
and im going insane like theres a storm in my head
but in this rap game i was born to be best
im the thorn in your flesh
gave your mother 5 dollars and bought her for sex
my form divine...the strong is i
my victim's corpses lie
in the woods attracting a swarm of flies
you soft with rhymes
my ish mad raw
i slap whores
so hard they left with cracked jaws
my rap gore...im heaven's spawn
you lust over men in thongs
every rhyme i write is a clever song
and ill be spittin lyrics till im dead and gone


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02 Dec 2020, 9:26 pm



yo focus quick
the rhyme is nice and the flow is sick
the lyrical cause
soundwaves hit hard
make your visual pause
smoke weed till theres only minimal thoughts
then sober quicker
photographed your girl naked and sold the picture
who you know is iller?
inhale cigaretts till i smoke the filter
your whole raps is just cloned and filler
my script vivid
grab a razor blade to quit livin
id rather live quitting
you lack rational skill
hip hop dead we need mc' s with a passion to kill
any track
only a few nice and too many wack


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03 Jan 2021, 9:22 am



gone away
searching for the right song to play
therell be peace tomorrow if theres war today
i was born to spray
toxic rhymes
i enter your system and stop your mind
your verse sloppy lines
that ish not in mine
i rock and shine
you got the wackest flow
i exit the matrix through the rabbit's hole
imagery and content i mastered both
but if you not feeling it kiss my a$$ and go
back where you came from
my intellect evolving yall stay dumb
im the next to fly
check the sign understand the best is i


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08 Jan 2021, 5:50 pm



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08 Jan 2021, 6:44 pm



yo my mind gone
express death in rhyme form
express best the lines strong
like how speed gets
hard to breath with a weed chest
for real lets smoke a joint
till we blabbing and im acting like i know your point
till we high as kuff
smoke through the night till we see the sky brighten up
bring back '03 rhymes them lines is tough
my verse woven like the finest rugs
what you see? what you find in us?
stay alone cuz in others theres no final trust
we go from shine to dust
we all got demons mine is lust
for drugs mayne
roll another blunt what the thugs say
f*ck face i shatter spines when the slugs spray
you might reach this level one day
doubt it though and i shine like how the sun stays
this verse laid back like sundays
torture victims in fun ways
sharp knives and blunt spades
and those who battled me
all left unconscious and some slain


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08 Jan 2021, 8:01 pm

funeralxempire wrote:
Good to see you're writing bars again.

Let me know if you ever try to record a verse, I can offer a bit of insight into mixing/producing. :nerdy:


Me too, I have a background in making both guitar band stuff, and EDM etc.
DIY mix engineering / producing. never made it big though
spent a few years away from doing stuff due to grief and other complications
getting back into engineering / learning to play guitar and scrape enough equipment to do something
worth while, although not easy when you live off next to nothing

but we still alive so we still can live
good luck



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08 Jan 2021, 8:54 pm

madbutnotmad wrote:
funeralxempire wrote:
Good to see you're writing bars again.

Let me know if you ever try to record a verse, I can offer a bit of insight into mixing/producing. :nerdy:


Me too, I have a background in making both guitar band stuff, and EDM etc.
DIY mix engineering / producing. never made it big though
spent a few years away from doing stuff due to grief and other complications
getting back into engineering / learning to play guitar and scrape enough equipment to do something
worth while, although not easy when you live off next to nothing

but we still alive so we still can live
good luck


i need a mic to record ):

commiserate wrote:


dope!


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30 Jan 2021, 8:30 am



yo every verse i done sick
and i flash gang signs like a young crip
you the reason why hip hop wack
delusional caught up in your tick tock trash
got a gram of white girl we gonna sniff off that
im from the darkest hell
thats why i like how the carcuss smell
guard yaself
im the king born
flying kites in a wind storm
im the angel with his wings gone
we governed by snakes that think wrong
im the violent typ
and christmas not the only time im up through silent nights
the rhyme shine is bright
she got murdered cuz the hoe dumb as sh*t
doing this since 03 no one this sick


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