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20 Feb 2021, 2:13 pm

Nadroj ... BaBaBoo Express Train :o :heart: I am loving reading these poetic contributions! So good! Those illustrations! 8)



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20 Feb 2021, 2:27 pm

One final love poem (turn away now if soppy repulses :lol:) ... before I start writing of nature, seasons, grit and darkness!

If Ever … written 30.1.21. as the moon rose over Surrey…

If ever there ever

Was reason to smile

If ever there ever

Was love worth my while.

Never have I ever known

Such a thing

Elusive till Winter’s

White landscape did Bring.

Now two pairs of footsteps

Imprinted in snow

As Moonlight winks down

As sweet love doth flow.

As bodies entangle

Hearts beat in time

Never did I ever

Think you’d Be Mine.



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22 Feb 2021, 6:55 pm

Here we go...

“Jane”

I feel like a crime scene that's left in the dark

Alone until I'm found

As I decompose I become nobody

I'm sad, alone and without a name

Nobody cared enough to confess

Nobody cared enough to make me a lost and found

When they draw my picture I hope for the best

When I'm talked about on the news nobody can piece together the rest

Sooner or later they give me a name

Like I am someone once again

While it's not my real name it'll have to do

Until my case is closed and the autopsy wishes come true


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25 Feb 2021, 12:07 pm

^^^ That was really goood, Zeromancerlove :heart: Hope to read more from you!



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25 Feb 2021, 12:10 pm

Juliette wrote:
^^^ That was really goood, Zeromancerlove :heart: Hope to read more from you!


Thank you!


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01 Mar 2021, 10:41 am

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Still No-One Comes … written 1st March, 2021

The water was deep,

The lake’s murky depths.

Would make it complete,

This plan He had hatched.

For wicked plans linger,

In minds twisted so.

A marriage so filled

With treacherous ego.

He bent and he bruised her

So fractured, so shattered

Tormented, No mercy

The one he adored.

“I love her, I own her”

“She’ll not have another”

“I’ll lock her away

From sister and brother”.

So many times,

She’d gaze to the skies

Look for the moon,

Some warmth in his eyes.

But dark knows no sunlight

It festers menacing.

So, thoughts of escape

She conjured with her own blessing.

A simplistic life

Warm sand beneath her.

Blue waters rippling

To heal and to cleanse her.

The soul broke so easy

She laments times gone by

When joy filled her heart

When love was a boy.

Tender and strong

Protective and true.

But dreams become shattered

When clouds cover you.

She calls to them gently

The new family.

The house where she bled

Dragged so easily.

She’s grappling ‘tween two worlds

Pleading for ears

To notice her screams

To notice

Her tears.

But, still no-one comes

Her body weighed down

Anchored and bricked,

He flees, starts afresh

He smirks and he licks.

So clever was He

To own and to conquer

To blacken her days

And her nights,

This dark Emperor.

Still … no-one comes …



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01 Mar 2021, 10:48 am

I hope someone comes for you soon....



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01 Mar 2021, 12:13 pm

^^^ The woman is a ghost, wanting the men in blue to arrive and drag the lake, so she can rest in peace. Thankfully, the lady in the lake, is not me. :P



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03 Mar 2021, 4:06 am

Juliette wrote:
I would love to read others' poetry here. Please share!

One of my more recent poems.

Serendipity written 8.2.21. as the snow fell …

Shadows flicker

Candles burn

Molten wax

Half filled urn

A gentle touch

Shivering

Two lovers wrapped

She holds Him.

Snowflakes drifting

To the ground

Frozen mountains

Puget Sound

Cosy cabin

In the woods

Sweet emotion

Understood.

Measured steps

Taking time

Takes no effort

Needs no rhyme

Strumming softly

Words so clear

Music drifting

Atmosphere.

Stratospheric journey

Projection unknown

Cupid’s aim, perfection

Lover’s Twilight Zone

Protective heart

She covers Him

Dice lands assuredly

Bound as one together

Sweet Serendipity

It's incredible, it's like a Haiku in English.


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03 Mar 2021, 4:29 am

My attempt to a Haiku.

Cricket songs
Under moonlit treetops,
A smile by my side.
Starlight's glimmer behind your face
Gazes clash silently
Hand covered smiles.
Shily you relax
The wind slips over
Each of our faces.
Clear moon sighting...
The sky remains
Eyelash dark.

The moon and crickets are fall kigos, words they use in haiku poems that relate to the season.

Korogi no uta tsuki no konoshita de watashi no soba de egao. Anata no kao no ushiro ni aru sutaraito no kagayaki shisen wa shizuka ni shototsu suru te wa egao de owa reta. Anata wa tayumu dekimasu kaze ga suberu suru watashitachi no kao no sorezore. Sukkiri tsuki no mokugeki soraga nokotte iru matsuge.

My favorite translation attempt, admittedly utterly hard given i know nothing about Japanese, translated back and forth with multiple engines, looked for expressions and for the synonyms more accurate and sounding the best, trying to avoid English-like words like Rabu = a Japanese interpretation of the word love, which to my horror, often appear in translation engines. The translation ends up not being a Haiku sadly.

'Remains' is a keyword, a wish of success that's undying.


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03 Mar 2021, 4:51 am

The emperors, the battles and the gardeners

It happened once upon a time.
They found a love, friendly, divine.
They met and learned what care's alike,
Hand in hand they pursued their hike.

A month as any other is,
Communicated overseas.
She opened up as time grew bold,
He taught her how to shine like gold.

When life threw in a million knives,
They stood still, strong and faced their lives.
They kept each other warm and close.
He fended her, and thus, she rose.

The rose emerged its bloom once more.
Its thorns returned its healthy core.
Its petals folded out for him
So he could feed and sink within.

His nose to smell the sweet fragrance
That kept his soul in endless trance.
Transparent, timeless, red romance
That made him want to sing and dance.

"Can I pursue you," she enquired,
Knowing it's mighty hard to fire
Somebody else's own desire.
Yet didn't wish to be a liar.

He said, as there was nothing he required,
"Whatever you ask of me, you will acquire."
The two best friends turned two souls wired
And so, one they became, building a firm empire.


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03 Mar 2021, 5:42 am

Rexi wrote:
The emperors, the battles and the gardeners

It happened once upon a time.
They found a love, friendly, divine.
They met and learned what care's alike,
Hand in hand they pursued their hike.

A month as any other is,
Communicated overseas.
She opened up as time grew bold,
He taught her how to shine like gold.

When life threw in a million knives,
They stood still, strong and faced their lives.
They kept each other warm and close.
He fended her, and thus, she rose.

The rose emerged its bloom once more.
Its thorns returned its healthy core.
Its petals folded out for him
So he could feed and sink within.

His nose to smell the sweet fragrance
That kept his soul in endless trance.
Transparent, timeless, red romance
That made him want to sing and dance.

"Can I pursue you," she enquired,
Knowing it's mighty hard to fire
Somebody else's own desire.
Yet didn't wish to be a liar.

He said, as there was nothing he required,
"Whatever you ask of me, you will acquire."
The two best friends turned two souls wired
And so, one they became, building a firm empire.

That's amazing. :o :heart:

Did you write this recently?

When you write these do you start with an outline of the message, breaking it down into verses and then finding rhymes? What's your process, or is it a secret?

Hmm... :rabbit:


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03 Mar 2021, 5:52 am

Rexi wrote:
My attempt to a Haiku.

Cricket songs
Under moonlit treetops,
A smile by my side.
Starlight's glimmer behind your face
Gazes clash silently
Hand covered smiles.
Shily you relax
The wind slips over
Each of our faces.
Clear moon sighting...
The sky remains
Eyelash dark.

The moon and crickets are fall kigos, words they use in haiku poems that relate to the season.

Korogi no uta tsuki no konoshita de watashi no soba de egao. Anata no kao no ushiro ni aru sutaraito no kagayaki shisen wa shizuka ni shototsu suru te wa egao de owa reta. Anata wa tayumu dekimasu kaze ga suberu suru watashitachi no kao no sorezore. Sukkiri tsuki no mokugeki soraga nokotte iru matsuge.

My favorite translation attempt, admittedly utterly hard given i know nothing about Japanese, translated back and forth with multiple engines, looked for expressions and for the synonyms more accurate and sounding the best, trying to avoid English-like words like Rabu = a Japanese interpretation of the word love, which to my horror, often appear in translation engines. The translation ends up not being a Haiku sadly.

'Remains' is a keyword, a wish of success that's undying.

I'm not sure I'm fully qualified to appreciate the awesomeness of this. :o

Have you written these before? Is this recent?


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03 Mar 2021, 7:15 pm

r00tb33r wrote:
Rexi wrote:
My attempt to a Haiku.

Cricket songs
Under moonlit treetops,
A smile by my side.
Starlight's glimmer behind your face
Gazes clash silently
Hand covered smiles.
Shily you relax
The wind slips over
Each of our faces.
Clear moon sighting...
The sky remains
Eyelash dark.

The moon and crickets are fall kigos, words they use in haiku poems that relate to the season.

Korogi no uta tsuki no konoshita de watashi no soba de egao. Anata no kao no ushiro ni aru sutaraito no kagayaki shisen wa shizuka ni shototsu suru te wa egao de owa reta. Anata wa tayumu dekimasu kaze ga suberu suru watashitachi no kao no sorezore. Sukkiri tsuki no mokugeki soraga nokotte iru matsuge.

My favorite translation attempt, admittedly utterly hard given i know nothing about Japanese, translated back and forth with multiple engines, looked for expressions and for the synonyms more accurate and sounding the best, trying to avoid English-like words like Rabu = a Japanese interpretation of the word love, which to my horror, often appear in translation engines. The translation ends up not being a Haiku sadly.

'Remains' is a keyword, a wish of success that's undying.

I'm not sure I'm fully qualified to appreciate the awesomeness of this. :o

Have you written these before? Is this recent?

They were for exes although I refused to dedicate the Haiku to my ex's birthday, but showed it to him.


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03 Mar 2021, 7:21 pm

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Rexi wrote:
The emperors, the battles and the gardeners

It happened once upon a time.
They found a love, friendly, divine.
They met and learned what care's alike,
Hand in hand they pursued their hike.

A month as any other is,
Communicated overseas.
She opened up as time grew bold,
He taught her how to shine like gold.

When life threw in a million knives,
They stood still, strong and faced their lives.
They kept each other warm and close.
He fended her, and thus, she rose.

The rose emerged its bloom once more.
Its thorns returned its healthy core.
Its petals folded out for him
So he could feed and sink within.

His nose to smell the sweet fragrance
That kept his soul in endless trance.
Transparent, timeless, red romance
That made him want to sing and dance.

"Can I pursue you," she enquired,
Knowing it's mighty hard to fire
Somebody else's own desire.
Yet didn't wish to be a liar.

He said, as there was nothing he required,
"Whatever you ask of me, you will acquire."
The two best friends turned two souls wired
And so, one they became, building a firm empire.

That's amazing. :o :heart:

Did you write this recently?

When you write these do you start with an outline of the message, breaking it down into verses and then finding rhymes? What's your process, or is it a secret?

Hmm... :rabbit:

I might start with a sentence or some verses I got into my head, sometimes just looking for rhymes if trying to make one for an occasion. I really like rhymes.


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04 Mar 2021, 6:32 pm

Rexi wrote:
My attempt to a Haiku.

Cricket songs
Under moonlit treetops,
A smile by my side.
Starlight's glimmer behind your face
Gazes clash silently
Hand covered smiles.
Shily you relax
The wind slips over
Each of our faces.
Clear moon sighting...
The sky remains
Eyelash dark.

The moon and crickets are fall kigos, words they use in haiku poems that relate to the season.

Korogi no uta tsuki no konoshita de watashi no soba de egao. Anata no kao no ushiro ni aru sutaraito no kagayaki shisen wa shizuka ni shototsu suru te wa egao de owa reta. Anata wa tayumu dekimasu kaze ga suberu suru watashitachi no kao no sorezore. Sukkiri tsuki no mokugeki soraga nokotte iru matsuge.

My favorite translation attempt, admittedly utterly hard given i know nothing about Japanese, translated back and forth with multiple engines, looked for expressions and for the synonyms more accurate and sounding the best, trying to avoid English-like words like Rabu = a Japanese interpretation of the word love, which to my horror, often appear in translation engines. The translation ends up not being a Haiku sadly.

'Remains' is a keyword, a wish of success that's undying.



That’s beautiful, Rexi! ❤️ Thanks for the kind words, btw. So good to read you! Look forward to hopefully reading more from you!