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JustSteph
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14 Oct 2007, 1:24 pm

If anyone can relaly be bothered to read them
http://lyricallives.bebo.com

-Steph



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14 Oct 2007, 3:17 pm

i like them :ninja:
the green dude signifies jealousy.
And ninjas


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14 Oct 2007, 3:41 pm

Hooray! Another lyricist!

I really like most of these, and I'm a sucker for metaphors, so of course I love the whole concept of "Just A Friend". "Apathetic Apology" is seething, and I love that - it reminds me of a vexed "Face Down" from a different angle. "Demon Of Despair" is great, and I see it making a fantastic pop hit. "She" works so well as a story of one abused child (that is what it's about, right?) and the chain reaction her suicide set off, but then it has a better turnout in the ending. So yeah, I'll most likely come back and look again. Great job!



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15 Oct 2007, 1:59 pm

Thanks =]