What do you think of my poem?

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Here is a poem I wrote about bullying...please read and tell me what you think...can it be improved?


I am the one who you laughed at everyday at school,
I am the one who you picked on to make yourself feel cool,
I am the one who hid in the corner and cried alone,
I am the one who lives but died a long time ago.
You are the one who bullies day after day,
You are the one who does not feel ok,
You are the one who feels so ashamed,
Don’t take it out on me please,
I am not the one to blame.

Was your father abusive to you?
Or your mother not loved you enough?
Was your childhood so terrible,
That you have to be above.
What did I ever do to you,
To make you feel so bad?
That you had to bully me,
Make my life feel so bad.

I like it immensely !

You put a lot into so few words... nice job!

Thanks i'm glad that you like it!

Only took me 10 minutes to write though so I could do better

OH SURE! Start showing off now huh?

How are you at limericks? ---->THE WRONG PLANET LIMERICK THREAD

Nope I am not showing off...simply stating a fact

I've already added a limerick to that thread but wont hurt to think of another

Hope you know I was just kidding about showing off