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lithium
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17 Feb 2008, 4:33 pm

these are some lyrics i wrote, it's genre is obviously grunge. and i take alot of inspiration from nirvana. i trust in it that these lyrics wont get stolen :D if you do steal em :evil: you will make me sad.

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She gave me my gun
I gave her my love

She gave me my gun
I gave her a kiss

She gave me my gun!

Do i want to die now?
I don’t know
Do i want to hide now?
I don’t know
Do i want to cry now
I don’t know!

She gave me my gun
I gave her my love

She gave me my gun
I gave her a kiss

She gave me my gun!

She anticipated
Never overrated
Not underestimated

She gave me my gun!

Do i love her?
(i know for sure)
do i love her?
(i know for sure)

she gave me my gun
(take it)
she gave me her love
(take it)
she gave me a kiss
(take it)
she gave me the gun i don’t want to use anymore

not anymore
(anymore)
not anymor
(anymore)e
not anymore
(anymore)
no not anymore!

And now i’m afraid
Endlessly restrained
Standing in de darkness
Lying in the rain
My mind is a stain
I’m waiting for the bullet to pierce my brain

she gave me my gun
i gave her my love
she gave me a kiss
she gave me my gun

i love her
i love her
i love her
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meaning of this song is pretty much about how depressed i am because i cant confess my love for a certain girl, hence the gun wich symbolizes my near suicidal depression wich is caused by her unknowingly. but it's okay i love her :oops:

-lithium


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pakled
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17 Feb 2008, 6:24 pm

uh...rejection is temporary...while suicide is distressingly permanent. There must be more to it than that. Still, might be an interesting song...some of my lyrics would put Dale Carnegie on a window ledge...;)



lithium
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18 Feb 2008, 10:47 am

the song is not about rejection, it's about the fear of expressing love to someone


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20 Feb 2008, 12:03 am

Have u ever listened to the pixies?



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20 Feb 2008, 2:14 pm

Why are you posting these? Analysis? Critique? Or just to have them somewhere as a record for copyright?



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20 Feb 2008, 10:25 pm

hm id like to know the melody.


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