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Shastania
Pileated woodpecker
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Joined: 17 Feb 2008
Age: 32
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Location: Dublin, Ireland

05 Aug 2008, 11:52 am

Emo poem #1:
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Drink drink drink
Drink 'till you've got bad breath
Slash slash slash
Slash yourself to death
Choke choke choke
Choke 'til the world turns black
Cry cry cry
Cry 'cause you know that life is crap


Emo poem #2:
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I want to draw a picture
A picture with a twist
I'll draw with a razor blade
I'll draw it on my wrist
And as I draw this picture
A river will appear
And as this river flows
So my pain shall disappear



Hodor
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Joined: 17 Mar 2008
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05 Aug 2008, 6:35 pm

An Ode Upon The Recent Poems of Shastania

Your second poem
Is definitely emo
But not pretentious


(Yes, that was meant to be a haiku. But sadly not emo :()


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