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Ravenclawgurl
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03 Aug 2008, 11:24 pm

All this Pain



I can no longer keep it inside

All this f****n pain

No longer can I let it hide

I want my box cutter back

So I can make more lines on my arm

No I dont

I dont want want to do any more self harm

I just want to be free

free from this agony

My heart is full of holes

But its in better condition than my soul

My soul is torn

ripped

destroyed beyond repair

Life isnt worth it any more

The pain is still there

the more i keep it in side

the more its eats me away

more and more i just need to say

i need help

why wont you believe me

mommy stop yelling at me

i didnt do anything to you

why r u causing me all this pain

I just need to get away



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04 Aug 2008, 12:19 pm

Fnord wrote:
Fnord wrote:
Fnord wrote:
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An Emo Haiku:

Nobody likes me.
Everybody hates me.
My life is hopeless.

Emo Haiku #2:

Another fine day
People laughing holding hands
Kill me kill me now

Emo Haiku #3:

No one understands
I hate all your attention
It's all about me

Emo Haiku #4:

I'm baring my soul
As if it matters to you
Stay away closer

Emo Haiku #5:

Oh the pain, the pain!
I cut myself to make sure.
Am I still alive?


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05 Aug 2008, 11:52 am

Emo poem #1:
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Drink drink drink
Drink 'till you've got bad breath
Slash slash slash
Slash yourself to death
Choke choke choke
Choke 'til the world turns black
Cry cry cry
Cry 'cause you know that life is crap


Emo poem #2:
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I want to draw a picture
A picture with a twist
I'll draw with a razor blade
I'll draw it on my wrist
And as I draw this picture
A river will appear
And as this river flows
So my pain shall disappear



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05 Aug 2008, 6:35 pm

An Ode Upon The Recent Poems of Shastania

Your second poem
Is definitely emo
But not pretentious

(Yes, that was meant to be a haiku. But sadly not emo :()


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