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pheonixiis
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10 Oct 2007, 10:58 am

Heres a poem. What does it say to you personally (if anything) and what does it tell you about me (in your opinion). A nod to the narcissistic push behind creation.

Once
I went back.

Buried my hands
deep within the
earth.
Beneath
rotting memories
ruin of my home

and

I came upon
her bones.
Laid them
before me
wept for her
for what she
had become
what she
had always
been.



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10 Oct 2007, 1:52 pm

I cant analyse it or you but I very much like it from a visceral place...I can "see it" and I can feel something.


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10 Oct 2007, 2:26 pm

Thank you. :)