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khaoz
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15 Feb 2014, 12:17 am

Melancholy all week long
This Valentine full moon shines
Now, even if I feel love not
From any being on this earth
I look to the sky, at this moon
I am the happiest person to ever exist
For at least one moment
Perfectly

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15 Feb 2014, 5:01 pm

Unusual title for a poem about peace and contentment in nature.

khaoz
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15 Feb 2014, 6:21 pm

I am an unusual, fluctuating particle

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15 Feb 2014, 9:06 pm

khaoz wrote:

I am an unusual, fluctuating particle

great response!
I think your poem expresses beautifully the sad comfort of melancholic grace.

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