I hurt somebody's feelings.

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SeaBright
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13 Jan 2008, 11:07 am

I hurt somebody's feelings.
I didn't mean to but it's true.
I hurt somebody's feelings.
When I said I don't want you.

I didn't meant to say it,
And it isn't what I meant,
A shoddy way to treat someone
Who's time on you was spent.

You didn't want to spend it,
Maybe it is or is not true.
And I didn't want you to waste your time
On another lying jew.....ish

experience you could have avoided,
or threat forepercieved without the help,
or knowledge foredetermined,
and I would I would just belllllch...

The problem for another,
The facts for a fancy sleuth,
The intel for satelites and studies,
And taps, humnit, and you....

Buuuuuuut...
That isn't how it is working,
It IS but not precise.
You've got some intel missing,
You really need the help.

It's too late now anyways,
To nip it in the bud. (?)
Ah flowers yes now flowers
Is what I'm thinking of..

Cars and trains and aeroplanes and states and roads; countries galore;
Sun and rain and winter snow, no Im not a complex whore...
What would make you say that was it something that you *knew*?
Ah yes....AH YES, glaringly,
Simply What when how and WHO.

Who told you I was violent-I couldn't wouldn't hurt a bug;
They told you I was wandering-as I ran off on the errands of;
How exactly does one walk when paralysis in sleep ensues.
And what is so horrible bout writing poems only gaged to tell you?

Is society so ignorant,
That it can't connect the dots,
YOU taught me this on paper,
In front of you I sit and rot.


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19 Jan 2008, 8:01 pm

you are a talented writer. what happened? who's feelings did u hurt(if anyones)?



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20 Jan 2008, 10:00 am

Beautifully written.



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20 Jan 2008, 11:13 am

i wish i could play an instrument. then i would turn this into a song. with permission, of course...



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20 Jan 2008, 9:10 pm

wow you guys, I'm flattered-thankyou!

I have superstitions about nameing even identifyers of certain people, tweety fan; its some sort imagined spiritual shielding factor that I picked up in childhood. But in word twists, when they come, I found I can exibit my meaning, and feel that the universe sees that it is recieved.


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20 Jan 2008, 9:17 pm

svend_sved wrote:
i wish i could play an instrument. then i would turn this into a song. with permission, of course...


certainly..


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