traven wrote:
community, omg how i **** that word
community, i need a sword to slash that word down
So, I didn't realize you probably weren't trying to rap, but even though I figured that out, I still like how I explained it.
funeralxempire wrote:
I assume it's oh-em-gee and not 'ohmahgawd'?
cah-mun-i-tee oh-em-gee how i raep that word
cah-mun-i-tee i need-a-sword to-slash that word down
Here's how I'd phrase it, for what it's worth
community, omg how i **** that word
community, pass mah blade, so it's demise i can ensure
you need to be aware of how your syllables breathe (in fours)
set 'em up in an in-and-out pattern like this, you see
but who am i to lecture, i'm only getting started
but still i'll get the hang of this rapping thing eventually
cah-mun-i-tee oh-em-gee-how i-raep-that-word-
cah-mun-i-tee pass-mah-blade so-it's-de-mise i-can-en-sure
you-need-to-be -a-wae-rah- how-yah-sil-ah-buls bree-th
set-em-up-in an-in-and-out pat-ter-en (breath-beat) like-this-you-see
but-who-am-i-to-lek-chur(breath-beat)i'um-on-lee-get-ting star-ted
but-still-i'yll-get-the-hang'ah-this ra-ping-thing ee-ven-cha-lee
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