Aimless wrote:
You might like this b9
yes i wrote that small verse after i saw your verse, and it was not fully polished.
i would change
"mountains are truthless
YET massive and ruthless
and they block the light of the day"
to
"mountains are truthless
AND massive and ruthless
and they block the light of the day"
Aimless wrote:
Anecdote of the Jar
Wallace Stevens
thankyou for thinking of me to post the following verse, but i am afraid i do not understand it. i will say what i think of the lines.
Quote:
I placed a jar in Tennessee,
And round it was, upon a hill.
was the jar's base "round" ? what is significant about it being on a hill? was it the highest hill in tennessee?
Quote:
It made the slovenly wilderness
Surround that hill.
"hill" rhymes with "hill" i guess, but it is the same word.
was the wilderness untidy? did the jar attract untidy plants and animals to surround the hill? if so, why?
Quote:
The wilderness rose up to it,
And sprawled around, no longer wild.
the jar somehow tamed the wilderness? what was in the jar?
Quote:
The jar was round upon the ground
And tall and of a port in air.
i can not fathom what this means sorry.
Quote:
It took dominion every where.
The jar was gray and bare.
so the jar took power everywhere, but the jar was gray and bare? so the jar was not made of glass? or maybe the jar was dirty. i do not understand.
Quote:
It did not give of bird or bush,
Like nothing else in Tennessee.
what does it mean to "give of bird", or "give of bush"?
and if it did not give of bird or bush UNLIKE anything else in tennessee, then does everything else in tennessee give of bird and bush?
i would be good if you could explain the meaning, but i guess this is a "got anything random to say" thread where speed and superficiality is of the essence, so a laborious dissemination of a verse will quickly be paved over by hundreds of ensuing posts.
thanks anyway. i appreciate your thought, but i am rather stupid when it comes to understanding external thoughts