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27 Nov 2017, 5:24 pm

Kuraudo7777 wrote:
Oh, right. <Discworld.> :P :lol: But wouldn't it have to be capitalized because it's sort of the beginning of a sentence?

Here's the revised version: [My mum helped.]

Memento Ludo
“I know many games. Dad taught me chess, checkers, Go.” The girl said, a genuinely cheerful smile fixed on her face. “Let’s play.”
She sat down on her sister’s bed: a nonchalant gesture under any other circumstances.
Her sister did not respond. She did not seem to be able to, but the girl continued talking regardless.
“How about skip rope? If either of us trips, the other wins. Will you play?” It was a simple question, not a challenge.
She turned towards the hooded and cloaked figure in the corner of the room.
“I accept.” death said calmly, and smiled.

It's not the beginning of a sentence.
"I accept," said death.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:26 pm

Oh. I see. My mind is kind of all over the place today.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:27 pm

Have a look at how speech marks are used.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:28 pm

Come to think of it, I don't think I've ever phrased as '...said Bob'; it's always been 'Joe said...'. I'm not sure why.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:28 pm

Is death a person?
Maybe you should use capitals.
I don't know now.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:30 pm

I like how Pratchett uses speech.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:32 pm

"Ho!" Said Nobby.
"Quite," said Antigua.
"Quiet, the lot of you," said Vimes sourly.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:34 pm

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Is death a person?


Who knows. 8)


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27 Nov 2017, 5:34 pm

Raleigh wrote:
Is death a person?
Maybe you should use capitals.
I don't know now.


I think if you're talking about an entity representing death, it's capitalized. At least, that's how I've always seen it done.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:36 pm

Maybe it's capitalized in the same way as Mum is calitalized. :mrgreen:


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27 Nov 2017, 5:41 pm

Everything is borrowed anyway, isn't it?
Really...


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27 Nov 2017, 5:42 pm

I wonder what Death's actual name is?
I would like it to be Darren.


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27 Nov 2017, 5:46 pm

Darren. Hmm...


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27 Nov 2017, 7:53 pm

Funny how death is always portrayed as a man.


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27 Nov 2017, 7:53 pm

Raleigh wrote:
Funny how death is always portrayed as a man.

The devil too.


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27 Nov 2017, 7:57 pm

Then we have Mother Nature who brings abundance and life.
Matter, mater, mother.


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