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14 May 2018, 3:56 pm

Does 17 characters in a six book series seem like a lot?

Granted, in my previous seven book series, there's over 100 characters...


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14 May 2018, 3:59 pm

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Does 17 characters in a six book series seem like a lot?

Granted, in my previous seven book series, there's over 100 characters...


No , the Bible has 3,237 different people :wink:


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14 May 2018, 4:02 pm

Bypassing the Bible before I start ranting, some very long series have over 100 characters, but my first series is a bit unique in that all of the characters are continual reincarnations of 8 specific characters that act as both creator and creation alike in the series' universe.


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14 May 2018, 4:05 pm

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I put a lot of work into my butt


you told me the only thing you put in your butt was fireworks :lol:


There is no evidence there is a firework in my butt apparently but when I do light one it helps shape my bum by blasting off un-need glucose.


May I refer you to exhibit A dated 01 Sep 2017, 1:05 am

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Don't leave yet, I've just opened a bag of popcorn.....

Why not join us instead... and share some of that popcorn.


I like fireworks,

I like fireworks,

I like to fire myself off the end of a firework and watch my ass explode, its good lulz.



I rest my case 8)


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14 May 2018, 4:07 pm

Kuraudo7777 wrote:
Bypassing the Bible before I start ranting, some very long series have over 100 characters, but my first series is a bit unique in that all of the characters are continual reincarnations of 8 specific characters that act as both creator and creation alike in the series' universe.


Sorry Kura , I don't read so couldn't give you a good answer , 17 main dudes over six books doesn't sound like too many


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14 May 2018, 4:36 pm

I calculated the full amount of words in my first series.

Wait for it...*pause for drama*

209,652.

It would cost $1,133 to edit it, according to one editing service I found. Gah.

Book II and V are probably the ones that need editing the most, since they're the longest.

Book IV is basically a novella [17,000 words], and Book III and VI/VII are nearly the same length [close to 30,000 words, each].


In my second series, there's three characters [sort of] introduced in Book I, six characters introduced in Book II, five characters introduced in Book III-IV, and two characters introduced in Book V [one of the characters from III-IV is technically the same character as the hero of V--reincarnation-wise]. Book VI has almost every character all in one place as a 'lash hurrah' kind of thing.


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14 May 2018, 4:42 pm

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It would cost $1,133 to edit it, according to one editing service I found. Gah.


What exactly does editing entail ?


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14 May 2018, 4:48 pm

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May I refer you to exhibit A dated 01 Sep 2017, 1:05 am

I rest my case 8)


I was referring to minor misdemeanors such as drugs when well dressed FooBar Incorporated was making strange comments in a store I freq when I had just purchased drugs about ten minutes prior. I don't remember what the man looked like cause of lack of eye contact but I said I like to play with fire referring to then purchased drugs.

See aren't nice, I don't plead the 5th, there was totally drugs up in here and apparently everyone knew but either A. Can not get a search warrant for reasons they were not there for or B. No one cares about drugs.

It was the last time I possessed drugs but not the last time I used someone elses :P



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14 May 2018, 4:53 pm

^ my bad , I took your comment too literally , now I can remove the mental image from my mind of you blowing up your ass with fireworks. :lol:


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14 May 2018, 5:01 pm

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It would cost $1,133 to edit it, according to one editing service I found. Gah.


What exactly does editing entail ?


Fixing grammatical errors and pointing out plot holes, presumably.


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14 May 2018, 5:06 pm

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^ my bad , I took your comment too literally , now I can remove the mental image from my mind of you blowing up your ass with fireworks. :lol:


Yeah well, what are you gonna do? gov is MKUltra-ing it, I am sure I have done some deed less then great but I am still standing here saying nuke it to hell. I mean everyone makes mistakes, you go Illuminati high and start having people say things that happened your entire life and you really only have two options. You can go comatose or you can try and make as much noise as you possible can about the immorality of it and hope some one hears at the top. Remember FEAR is False Evidence Appearing Real... Not everything that is said about me is true no doubt but the spying and the lying and manipulation has to go.

I am doing the loud choice 8O

We are a people, not target practice for the elite 8)



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14 May 2018, 5:08 pm

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It would cost $1,133 to edit it, according to one editing service I found. Gah.


What exactly does editing entail ?


Fixing grammatical errors and pointing out plot holes, presumably.


I'm sure your writings fine , and as for plot holes , your kidding me , your gonna see plot holes yourself , you are an autistic writer.


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14 May 2018, 5:11 pm

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Remember FEAR is False Evidence Appearing Real...


You've said it before but I like this ^ 8)


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14 May 2018, 5:13 pm

^^True, but I'm also my worst and harshest critic, so I'm probably seeing problems where none exist thanks to routinely poking holes in my stories [no pun intended] and thinking that they're terrible.


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14 May 2018, 5:18 pm

I'm am also my worst enemy


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14 May 2018, 5:22 pm

The Saboteur is probably one of my archetypes.


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