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15 Aug 2018, 4:13 pm

One thing I need to realize when writing omniscient is that the tension evaporates instantly. Therefore: stop trying to force it in.
Hiding a plot twist until the end by making characters who should know about not reveal it to the reader is so contrived. I told myself that i wouldn't fall into that trap, but I did.
Even worse is that I so dislike it when writers try to dance around an issue like that, by hiding it.


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15 Aug 2018, 5:59 pm

I'm only missing cowboys; that's about the only genre I haven't messed with.

Fantasy, sci-fi without the science, deep space, supernatural, romance, family drama, mystery, spirituality, comedy, bits of dark fantasy, bits of horror...

Am I missing anything?


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15 Aug 2018, 8:35 pm

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15 Aug 2018, 9:21 pm

I'd like some ice cream with lime sauce.


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15 Aug 2018, 9:53 pm

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dragnet, are you lurking? pls pop in and let us know how you are.

Yes to this! (I’m a longtime anonymous addicted lurker here.) I’ve been worried about him too.



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16 Aug 2018, 1:30 am

AnneOleson wrote:
cathylynn wrote:
dragnet, are you lurking? pls pop in and let us know how you are.

Yes to this! (I’m a longtime anonymous addicted lurker here.) I’ve been worried about him too.


hi, anne.



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16 Aug 2018, 6:12 am

Greetings fellow members of the Millbury, heheheh


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16 Aug 2018, 6:17 am

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Greetings fellow members of the Millbury, heheheh


Hello Mr Kazans,

What is the Millbury?



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16 Aug 2018, 7:04 am

This is Millbury, though that's its fictional name :oops: , it's non-fictional name is Avebury

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This is Millbury, though that's its fictional name :oops: , it's non-fictional name is Avebury

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Oh, I didn't know that and it is just up the road from me Sir.

In fact I may pop up to Avebury and hug some stones sometime soon.



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16 Aug 2018, 3:52 pm

Definitely worthy of philosophical contemplation. :D

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16 Aug 2018, 5:33 pm

I miss Raleigh and Datab4 and Froya and biggles, and Rachey. :(


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16 Aug 2018, 5:57 pm

^ Hi. Raleigh has been unwell for 3 or 4 weeks.



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16 Aug 2018, 7:10 pm

^I figured that. :cry:


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16 Aug 2018, 8:27 pm

cathylynn wrote:
AnneOleson wrote:
cathylynn wrote:
dragnet, are you lurking? pls pop in and let us know how you are.

Yes to this! (I’m a longtime anonymous addicted lurker here.) I’ve been worried about him too.


hi, anne.

Thank you Cathylynn. Someday I’ll get the nerve to join in the postings here. You all seem so interesting and caring.



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16 Aug 2018, 11:48 pm

AnneOleson wrote:
cathylynn wrote:
AnneOleson wrote:
cathylynn wrote:
dragnet, are you lurking? pls pop in and let us know how you are.

Yes to this! (I’m a longtime anonymous addicted lurker here.) I’ve been worried about him too.


hi, anne.

Thank you Cathylynn. Someday I’ll get the nerve to join in the postings here. You all seem so interesting and caring.


with any luck, most of us will be here ready to respond.