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barber
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22 Apr 2008, 3:40 pm

Being me
Being me
An aspie in a normal world
An unsocial socalite
An outsider living among insiders
Forced to function in an unnatural way
Living an unnatural life
Existing in body
But dead inside
Coming to life again
Only to die again
Unable to properly function

Betrayed by life
But living it anyway

Being me
An outsider in this world
This place
This life
(just wanted to what you guy thought of this)



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22 Apr 2008, 3:44 pm

Short and sweet. I like it. 8)


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22 Apr 2008, 3:46 pm

8)


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22 Apr 2008, 3:55 pm

thanks i find that poems like this one have hepled me in some ways understand more about who i am



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22 Apr 2008, 4:34 pm

I like it :) I Love poetry, reading and writing it!!