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Daryl_Blonder
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02 Aug 2011, 10:25 pm

Poke wrote:
No offense, but it seems kinda prosaic.


No offense taken. I want to hear any and all criticism. The response from this has been overwhelmingly positive.

What about it did you find "prosaic?" While there are certainly definitive overarcing themes, the story is mostly told in anecdotes. It's a highly experimental form of writing.



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04 Aug 2011, 1:48 pm

I have to say I'm bummed that my post in the adult section "Male and female perceptions on sex" got twice as many hits as this. Was hoping to really start a steady stream of feedback on the book...