Common App Essay about Asperger's.

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Hello, I'm very new to this site. I looked up "college essay Asperger's" and came across another post like the one I'm making, so I thought I'd ask the same question. I'm writing an essay for the common app prompt "Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story." I want to know what you guys think of my essay, is this even a good topic to talk about for it? I feel like the tone might be too casual I'm really not sure, I guess it's better than sounding pretentious. I also kind of think it might be a bit too personal? I mean the point is to show them who you are, but I'm really not sure. I feel like my conclusion could be better too. Any constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks for any advice!
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I want you to know that someone read your post. I would respond better but I really have no idea what you are talking about. Best of luck in college!