Essay -Do you ever feel like you don't belong in this world?

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21 Jan 2006, 11:38 pm

It started out as a response to the "Do you ever feel like you don't belong in this world?" thread, and snowballed into a huge post. And then I remembered something, the once a year literary magazine at my school is accepting submissions. So I wanted some comments and criticisms, cause I might consider submitting it.

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There's the world, and then there's me. As much I enjoy lots of the people I know and love, I almost never feel really "connected" to anyone. I can socialize, but there's always that one element I seem to be missing. I never really feel like I'm a part of anything; conversations, movies, videogames even. They're all just there, and I'm here. I want that feeling: the feeling of being absorbed into a simple conversation or a movie. The feeling people get when watching sports, movies, and having a good conversation. That feeling of living it and being a part of it, whatever that "it" may be. I was once talking with someone about how I find porn boring becuase it's just images on a screen. She suggested that I imagine like they really happened, like it's right there in front of me. I was confused by this, because I would still feel the same; I wouldn't feel like a part of it. It'd be there, and I'd be here. It's like that with most everything, and few things can break through and engross me. Music. I can feel music, I can be a part of music, and I can "be" music. I good example would be the first time I watched The Phantom of the Opera. I was so into the expereince that I had blocked out everytihng else. I was a part of this fictional opera house world, in the audience, and enjoying every note. Is that the feeling? A feeling that was so intense, the fire alarm went off during a climatic song and I jumped a foot into the air off my feet. That was it, that is the feeling I want. The music, the dramatics, the passion...I was finally in it. Then goes the fire alarm, smacking me back into the real world. A world sapped of emotion, and ripe with ennui. I was back in the world, the real one. I wasn't back into the world I wanted until we restarted from the point at which we left off, and waited a few minutes to be pulled back in. I can hardly describe how much I longed for that feeling once more, if even for a second. The gripping feeling, and for once, the lack of emotional apathy. I was emotional, because I was amassed into a world full of emotions I finally understood. They were sung emotions. Sung clearly enough that even I, a man who can hardly recognize when he's anything besides confused or angry, understood with complete clarity. I fely symapathetic for a character, which again is beyond rare, seeing as how I hardly attach any emotional value to real people. The phantom was sad and lonely, and his ignorance of social correctness led to his behavior. He didn't know he was incorrect in the way he acted, he was me. At the time of me watching it, I was in the darkest hour of what was to be a two year long depression.

It was February, and I was in the midst of recovering from an event so aggravating thinking about it almost brings me to tears. My personality is, well... unusual at best. I have my seasons, as does the rest of the world. Winter is always especially depressing for whatever reason, the exact reason why I have no positive memory of Valentine's Day. Every year since middle school, I've managed to screw up somehow in getting a girlfriend on this holiday. Then again, up until this year, I've always been depressed during the winter. Or, since puberty. Going on, last year's winter was intersting. I, as usual, was intersted in someone. I had known her for a few months, and she was actually in the class with me. By saying she was in my homeroom, who it is would be a bit too obvious, but it was fairly obvious to begin with I'm sure. I had made a few miserable attempts at flirting or asking her out, but she always said she was busy. IB does that to people, or so I convinced myself. Well, I thought, maybe chocoalte well win her over. I bought some, and gave it to her. "That sounds so nice!", you're probably thinking. Well it wasn't. I know any "normal" guy would've been romantic or overtly desparate.

I was vague. With my shyness and timdity at the time, the plan I had thought up in my head fell apart after the first step. I had planned to sit down in homeroom with her (as usual), and give her the chocolate in a confident way and proceed to ask her out. Something like that. What really happened? I sat down (at least that part didn't fall apart), and I put the chocolate in front of me. I looked at her, the face she had was about to go from confused to utterly priceless in comical retrospect. I calmly pushed the chocoalte in front of her, while looking down, and uttered "Here." After at least a minute of dancing around the room with my eyes, occasionally glancing and waiting for a reaciton of some kind, she asked me a question. "Did you get some for _____ too?" I simply replied no, the feeling of confusion and anger were added to the omnipresent sense of sadness almost instantly. Unfortunately, those were the only emotions I really "felt" at the time. I failed to mention that when I'm intersted in a girl, she almost always starts off as an obsession. A beautiful maiden revisiting my thoughts and flooding my world with joy and happiness. That world still remains to be a false one, and the real world made that all too obvious on Valentine's Day. I was socially inept, still am, always well be. Regardless of how much I act like somehow who can manage to fit in, the real Ben never can. I'm just here, a phantom.

Phantom, from Phantom of the Opera. Sad, lonely, and obsessed. The only feelings I felt then and feel now, are mostly in my head. And while music has the power to make me feel connected, it's not the only thing. Drama, human flesh on stage with raw emotion pouring out right in front of me. Drawing me in to it's world, a world that is so close to real I could literally walk up and be a part of it. But like everything else, it's always short lived. But music can always be there, playing back in my head. I can crawl into a dark corner of my mind and play music all day long. No electronics needed, just the jukebox of memory. Imagining orchestras, fiddling my thoughts away, and reliving my favorite songs. Only in my head, no one else is there with me.

No one else can sit in my mind, and relax for a while. Meditate with me as I sit and ponder the intricate working of a social structure that people seem to know naturally. I still have trouble understanding the opposite sex, even my own too. People make no sense, and that's the only thing I have in common with most. I can sit down all day and watch the world go by, and feel nothing but confusion as I search for logic in the way people are. There is none, people are people. It can't be true. I'm looking for something, and I know it's there. There is an explanation, a reasoning, behind people. Maybe if I finally understand them, I can bridge the emotional gap and finally feel them. Empathy, do I really want it? Well understanding people really help me connect on a plane I hardly know exists? Well understanding why people cry about death help me in feeling the same? Could viewing regret help me feel it? I doubt it, but I search anyways. All I have left in this world I want to feel is sex, and an emotional connection with another human. Those aren't the same thing, and I need to remember that.

There's the world, and then there's me.


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22 Jan 2006, 11:42 am

I feel like I belong on the planet Earth, and this ain't it somehow.



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22 Jan 2006, 3:02 pm

That's a great essay. I feel the exact same way around my school. Feeling like a another thing other than a human. Wishing I had someone else that truly cared about me the way I am (other than family). It seems like every girl with some attractiveness has a boyfriend, maybe for a few years already. I'm really behind where I should be in social interaction, but you must not give up. Telling people who I am exactly and how I feel gives me confidence. Make that essay known!



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22 Jan 2006, 11:48 pm

Any critisms? Any other stuff that would fit in I didn't mention? Questions, comments, concerns?


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23 Jan 2006, 12:26 am

Sarcastic_Name wrote:
Any critisms? Any other stuff that would fit in I didn't mention? Questions, comments, concerns?


I think perhaps you should post this on your WP blog or maybe submit it to the Writign and Poetry section.

It's hard to critique something like this because it's subjective and so it ought to be very personal. I could be a nitpick over a couple grammar/writing styles things but no, I won't pick on you for that. :wink:

The only thing I could say is as a philosopher and a theologian. I have always felt that AS inclines us towards a more existential viewpoint, and one of the key elements of existentialism is an awareness of how alone and isolated we as individuals are in the world. We see the limitations of communication and community and thatthey don't result in actual communion between persons, even if sematically that's implied. With this awareness, the world seems closed off to us, making us feel perpetually on the "outside" and increasing our sense of isolation.

The answer to this sense of existential isolation has long been known among philosophers, mystics, artists and other more "keen" individuals. The answer is transcendence. If you are surrounded by walls you cannot penetrate, what do you do? You can go down by sinking into despair, indifference and despondency, or up through transcendence. And before you blow this off as nonsense, I can tell you you've already found that transcendence in music. That feeling of being taken out of your sense of isolation, of being engaged by something outside of yourself, of being engrossed, perhaps transported into another reality or transfigured into another person - that's transcendence. Music is often a portal for transcendence for many people and they don't even know it. So can art, movies, literature, poetry, philosophy, religion, even sciences.

The existential challenge for us is that even if we find transcendence in something, it's temporary. We have to learn to cope with what Walker Percy called "re-entry" into the mundane world, the world that makes us feel like an outcast or a prisoner. Percy theorized that this why so many great artists, writers, and musicians were drunks, drug addicts, sex fiends, compulsive gamblers or in some other way self-destructive. Those activities distract from the pain of returning to this world and all its torments after experiencing transcendence through their creativity. On the other hand, some people, like me, just wallow in depression, pessissism and self-loathing. Percy acually made quite an amusing list of things people could do to cope with this "re-entry" - if you're intrigued, you should check his Lost in the Cosmos: The Last Self Help Book. It's in there.

Well that's my 2 cents.