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Ghosthunter
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31 May 2005, 2:52 am

1)...The Question?

No question!

2)...The Statements by Ghosthunter!

A Poem wrote:
I walk this dark forest one as the
the trees. The leaves and the wind
are one with me. True connectedness
comes from the heart. The singlar
leaf cannot light lifes spark. The
wind will ruffle the mystery of me to
your ear. The sand beneath you feet
will tickle you and tell you I am near.

Can't you hear the wind pull your
direction so close and so far, so
this lonely heart can reach for you
not afar.

Bleeding with wisdom as the wind
blows on by. They who do not
hear the wind, just shiver and sigh.

Bleeding with truth and honesty
at your door. roses on one hand
and my heart not to be stepped upon
by you and not to reach the floor.

I harbour in the tree's so my
walk of shadow and light will
be seen. Child of Golden, felt
but sometimes unseen.

Bless be father skye, as your
golden light shines from me.
Bless be mother moon, as your
darkness eminates from me
felt, not seen. Silent be this
child golden, in dawns early
light. Hearts brave and not
many have felt it's brave flight.

I walk these streets alone
and wanting to touch, and speak
to you some more, but the
child is silent golden and seen
but not always heard upon your
door. May love and relationship
allow it to flow, as it's fire finds
water and flowers in the heart
can grow.


I know this is a sloppy poem,
but it is all that could come to mind
at 12:47am on a Tuesday. I seek
connectedness in my heart with
another, and being HFA that is
sometimes quite difficult.

I give my heart freely, and have
been trampled like your floor
rug and my emotions are sincere,
because I can't lie to you, since
if I do I lie to myself, and that
is the worst crime I can commit
and I have to live with myself.

I seek romance in my life so
feeling, heart , fire, emotion can
take flight. I can in energy
scare some, and those brave
inspire. Inspiration to others
gives me hope that I am, I grow
and persevere.

3)...The Question Repeated!

No question!



Tere
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31 May 2005, 6:13 am

Ghosthunter I love your poetry. I know it comes completely from your heart.

There are so many emotions that are wrung from each word that forms each sentence. I see pictures when I read your work.

Never Change!!

Are you published?



Last edited by Tere on 31 May 2005, 1:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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31 May 2005, 6:53 am

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31 May 2005, 11:12 am

nice job Ghosthunter!



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31 May 2005, 11:21 am

Nice work. 8)


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31 May 2005, 7:48 pm

I didn't think it was sloppy at all. I liked it.



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31 May 2005, 9:16 pm

I am glad you liked the poem. I am
also glad you posted here. Thankyou.

sincerely,
Ghosthunter