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madbutnotmad
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06 Nov 2020, 11:19 am

Asperger Syndrome
bad poetry...

Asperger Syndrome
my invisible cage
that stops me getting laid
and stops me getting paid

a cage that restrains me
from being normal or real
leaving me as an observer
to watch how normal life must feel

always an outsider
never asked in
unless someone runs an event
to include my kin

and then on bad days
my head explodes
and no one understands
why the world around me erodes

will this cage ever be broken
or will it always be
my life long tormenting torture of a prison

at least the criminals can leave once their time has been paid
but aspies will never leave until their life has been played



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06 Nov 2020, 2:34 pm

Well said!


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06 Nov 2020, 3:21 pm

Well expressed! (Definitely NOT bad poetry!)

Must include you in the “Ode to Wrongplanet” Christmas Edition :P



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07 Nov 2020, 12:31 am

madbutnotmad wrote:
Asperger Syndrome
bad poetry...

Asperger Syndrome
my invisible cage
that stops me getting laid
and stops me getting paid

a cage that restrains me
from being normal or real
leaving me as an observer
to watch how normal life must feel

always an outsider
never asked in
unless someone runs an event
to include my kin

and then on bad days
my head explodes
and no one understands
why the world around me erodes

will this cage ever be broken
or will it always be
my life long tormenting torture of a prison

at least the criminals can leave once their time has been paid
but aspies will never leave until their life has been played


yes.. i figured out how to get paid so far though, but otherwise it describes my life.. I did get invited but was too incompetent to fit in.. time to make your cage comfy I suppose?



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07 Nov 2020, 12:53 am

madbutnotmad wrote:
Asperger Syndrome
bad poetry...

Asperger Syndrome
my invisible cage
that stops me getting laid
and stops me getting paid

a cage that restrains me
from being normal or real
leaving me as an observer
to watch how normal life must feel

always an outsider
never asked in
unless someone runs an event
to include my kin

and then on bad days
my head explodes
and no one understands
why the world around me erodes

will this cage ever be broken
or will it always be
my life long tormenting torture of a prison

at least the criminals can leave once their time has been paid
but aspies will never leave until their life has been played


... ... ...
BEAUTIFUL and sad at the same time... :heart: :heart: :heart:



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07 Nov 2020, 2:15 am

Well said.

Now, is this invisible cage also rusty?


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08 Nov 2020, 1:37 am

madbutnotmad wrote:
Asperger Syndrome
bad poetry...

Asperger Syndrome
my invisible cage
that stops me getting laid
and stops me getting paid

a cage that restrains me
from being normal or real
leaving me as an observer
to watch how normal life must feel

always an outsider
never asked in
unless someone runs an event
to include my kin

and then on bad days
my head explodes
and no one understands
why the world around me erodes

will this cage ever be broken
or will it always be
my life long tormenting torture of a prison

at least the criminals can leave once their time has been paid
but aspies will never leave until their life has been played
In what way does autism prevent from being real?[/color]


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