Give up while you still can

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I must be the bad guy because i speak my mind
like no matter what I say, its always a lie
Theres no way in the world I could be right
cause they dont even care how hard I've had to fight
Or if I've seen the light, or try to share it
Im just told to watch my mouth, instead just spare it
I must be wrong, Im nothing to cherish
They lick my wounds, like Im just some damn spare ribs
Like A terrorist born on this sacred land
Nothing sacred about it, not one damn
no single blessing, or curse to exam
Everything you heard was all just a scam
A plan devised by guys too long ago
Everythings changed, yet we follow the same mold
those acting different, arent considered bold
they're just told dont play your cards, instead just fold

Very good stuff....damn, makes me want to start writing again..keep up the good work

I like it.

Ah yes.... "poetry" ... an excuse for writing nonsense and assuming it validated.

*Yawns*

If it can't be said in prose then it probably isn't worth saying.

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The difference between nonsense and full of sense is the set of eyes that read...

I know cynicism and contrarianism is the in thing for young folks, but it's fatalistic and trite. An uplifting message is such a rare thing these days.