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24 Jul 2013, 3:58 pm

Finish the story. I'll begin with the first post. Use only haikus.

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Liz answered the door. It was her ex-husband, Ted. He looked exhausted.



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24 Jul 2013, 4:15 pm

The lines on his face., furrowed as a deep ravine, betrayed years of pain.



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25 Jul 2013, 2:43 pm

She drew back in shock. He was from her distant past. She swallowed, and froze.



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25 Jul 2013, 2:46 pm

"Why would Ted be here?"
Liz grew very sick with fear.
She thought she'd throw-up.


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25 Jul 2013, 2:49 pm

Meanwhile, back in town
A woman waits by the phone
The clock ticks away



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25 Jul 2013, 2:51 pm

Each second that passed
Felt as if it were hours.
Would the phone ring soon?


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25 Jul 2013, 2:55 pm

Ted cleared his dry throat. "My car broke down, down the street," He offered quickly.



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25 Jul 2013, 2:57 pm

Liz was caught off-guard.
"Would you like to come inside?"
She managed to ask.


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25 Jul 2013, 2:57 pm

She looked in his eyes
Some one else was there; a shadow
Some one else was there



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25 Jul 2013, 2:59 pm

"Thanks, Liz," Ted muttered.
Liz's heart began to pound.
Ted entered the house.


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25 Jul 2013, 3:02 pm

Liz was unaware of the shadow slipping in behind Ted softly.



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25 Jul 2013, 3:04 pm

The shadow's name was
Tommy, and he was really
A wicked prankster.


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25 Jul 2013, 7:02 pm

A curse forever
Cast strong onto a shadow
This was Tommy's fate.



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26 Jul 2013, 6:36 am

Tommy then made the
Phone ring of the downtown gal.
Will she answer soon?


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26 Jul 2013, 6:52 am

She answered promptly
She had waited for his call
As he knew she would



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26 Jul 2013, 7:12 am

"Ah, Ruth, you answered,"
Tommy sneered into the phone.
"Better stay alert!"


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Helinger: Well, try seeing accomplishment!
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