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08 Dec 2011, 2:50 am

I am really bad with dialogue. For my English class, we had to write modernized versions of the balcony scene in Romeo and Juliet with different language. My romantic dialogue was so bad, and I never usually write romantic stuff because I know that it would come off as very stilted because I have no idea how people speak when they are in relationships. My strengths are first person characters introspecting, outside the box plot twists and stories, scenery descriptions and good imagery. I think I did terribly on that assignment, and it confirmed my suspicion that I cannot write romance.



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09 Dec 2011, 8:10 pm

I find I have the same problem as you I'm fine with writing the more structural stuff the exposition and as mine is a war story the battles but the character development is hard.



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12 Dec 2011, 11:14 pm

Here's my latest rough plot outline for a fantasy short story/novella:

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The story is set in a fantasy world that has not progressed beyond a tribal Copper/Early Bronze Age stage of cultural and technological development; there are no extensive empires and large cities are few and far between. The world has three races of human beings that are each divided into squabbling tribes: the white-skinned and egalitarian Japhethites who live in northern forests; the tawny and patriarchal Shemites who roam the deserts; and the black-skinned and matriarchal Kamites who are native to the tropics.

Many generations ago, one Shemitic tribe under the influence of the evil god Zarathya invaded the land of the Kamites, but they were defeated after a Kamitic sorceress seized Zarathya's "heart" and trapped it inside an amulet, decreasing the god's power and reducing him to a mere demon. The Kamites kept the amulet and guarded it fiercely from Zarathya's followers, but now that the Shemites' numbers and strength have replenished, they under the leadership of the magician Yaghoub demand their god's heart be returned.

Kasaqa, a young Kamitic chieftess, decrees that the amulet be sold to foreign merchants to protect her people, but the merchants' ship is seized and plundered by the Japhethite pirate Gareth, with whom Kasaqa has had a love affair without knowing about his criminal activities. Gareth, who knows the amulet's ancient history but not why it was sold to the merchants, decides to return it to Kasaqa. After Kasaqa gets captured by Yaghoub's forces after a battle and Gareth swoops in to save her, Yaghoub promises to free Kasaqa as long as Gareth gives him the amulet. Gareth loves Kasaqa too much to resist the deal, but once she is freed, she inquires about how the amulet ever came into Gareth's possession, forcing him to finally confess to piracy. Now Gareth and Kasaqa must cooperatively retrieve the amulet from Yaghoub despite Kasaqa's newfound anger towards her former lover...


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13 Dec 2011, 8:23 am

I can write about 3000 in one sitting but after that I get a bit burned out 10000 might be possible for me one day if I forced myself. My problem it takes me so long to fill in the dialogue and I don't really do much of a plan.



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15 Dec 2011, 4:32 pm

Just finished a chapter-by-chapter outline for my fantasy story, which I'm calling Heart of the God. It's a tale which will feature pirates, dinosaurs, evil gods, tribal warfare, and hot interracial sex.


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16 Dec 2011, 4:35 pm

This is just a personal view, but I think you can still be a successful writer, even if you don't interact often. Writing is very abstract. Maybe you can write fables, or a children's novel. You can get your ideas reading other books.

Not everyone has the same tastes either. I don't really like Stephen King's stories. They're just not in my list of interesting novels. Yet To Kill a Mockingbird was a very good read.

I don't think I know of any writers that has Aspergers though. But I would find it hard to believe if there wasn't a successful Aspergers writer.



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17 Dec 2011, 5:06 am

Jane Austin is believed to have had it her hand writing and spelling where almost unreadable apparently .



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17 Dec 2011, 5:14 am

Greg Egan is reckoned to be aspie.



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19 Dec 2011, 10:27 am

I always have the main character of my stories to have Asperger's, or at least traits and write the whole story in first person perspective from that character. In my Lion King and Sonic fan fictions, I just write myself into the story. When I wrote myself into my fan fictions as an unbeatable super heroine figure who could talk to animals and served as Simba's veterinarian and game warden, I probably would have been considered a Mary Sue by anyone who read it other than my parents; but at the time, writing them was very therapeutic. I based the villains off of real life people I didn't like and gave them a very similar name. For instance, there was a zoologist in real life I had decided I didn't like whose name is Tim. In the fan fictions, his name was Jim. When I wrote stories as a little kid, I would use my teachers and kids who were mean to me as villains and call them by their real names, but as I grew older, I learned this was wrong if I ever wanted to get published and it never made for an interesting villain. My most notorious villain was originally based of a real life zoologist by the name of Tim Clutton-Brock; who for some reason I decided I didn't like. In the stories, his name was Jim Blutton-Crock but I soon realized that was too obvious and anyone who had two brain cells and knew who Tim Clutton-Brock was would know who my villain was supposed to be. As I got better at writing and more mature and realized Tim Tim Clutton-Brock isn't as bad as I thought he was, I only kept the name Jim but made him more of a cross between Harry Harlow and Sonic SatAM Robotnick and even threw in some traits of Adolph Hitler and Joseph Stalin. Anyway, I was never able to write a story with social interaction in it or from the POV of another character (my protagonists/narrators are basically me). My stories always have to be written in first person perspective via a character that has the same ideals as a me. I've always been told that my stories are "very descriptive" or that they "come alive", so I guess I put more effort into the details than the social interaction. I only put as much social interaction that is needed to get the story moving along.


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19 Dec 2011, 10:54 am

MagicMeerkat wrote:
I always have the main character of my stories to have Asperger's, or at least traits and write the whole story in first person perspective from that character.

I once attempted a romance novel with an Aspie male lead, but I aborted it in part because I didn't think I could write a romance without having actually be in a relationship and in part because my premise was way too similar to a movie titled Adam (seriously, the main differences were my story's high school setting and the female lead's African-American ethnicity). The aspie protagonist wasn't really so much of a problem though, as I had myself to draw from.

Come to think of it, a lot of my protagonists have my character traits, especially my flaws. For example, I have a short temper and a strong desire to earn people's respect, so my protagonists often have either of those.

Another of my quirks as a fantasy and historical writer is that even though I am white, I like having a lot of people of color, especially black people, in my stories. If I do have a white protagonist, he's always an adventurer who has a black love interest and otherwise surrounds himself with colored people. I've always gravitated towards the more exotic, darker-skinned cultures and feel that they are under-used in the fantasy and historical genres. That said, I have also looked into Germanic cultures such as the Norse and Anglo-Saxons as inspirations for my white adventurers.


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19 Dec 2011, 11:00 pm

BrandonSP wrote:
I once attempted a romance novel with an Aspie male lead, but I aborted it in part because I didn't think I could write a romance without having actually be in a relationship and in part because my premise was way too similar to a movie titled Adam (seriously, the main differences were my story's high school setting and the female lead's African-American ethnicity). The aspie protagonist wasn't really so much of a problem though, as I had myself to draw from.


I'm struggling with this at the moment. I'm writing a young adult book with a 16 year old Aspie as the main male character (the protagonist is a 17 year old NT girl). I don't have a problem with him, even if I'm not a male, but I'm having a problem on how to make her fall for him. I mean, he's great and all, but I want to make him both an authentic Aspie AND attractive for a high school girl. In my mind, it seems easy, but it should be something that NT readers would get: I want them to realize he's a great guy.

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Another of my quirks as a fantasy and historical writer is that even though I am white, I like having a lot of people of color, especially black people, in my stories. [...] I've always gravitated towards the more exotic, darker-skinned cultures and feel that they are under-used in the fantasy and historical genres.


I usually have at least one interracial couple in my stories... I don't know, it just happens. I agree non-white people are underused in fantasy. However, I cringe at word "exotic", so I wouldn't call those cultures that. There's no such a thing as an "exotic" culture.



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19 Dec 2011, 11:28 pm

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I usually have at least one interracial couple in my stories... I don't know, it just happens. I agree non-white people are underused in fantasy. However, I cringe at word "exotic", so I wouldn't call those cultures that. There's no such a thing as an "exotic" culture.
I know the idea that certain cultures are "exotic" is rooted in a perception of difference from one's own background, but as long as you don't rank cultures in a value hierarchy and acknowledge that the people in those cultures are still human beings who need respect I don't see the problem.


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20 Dec 2011, 4:57 am

I find any fictitious universe I create to write a novel in a quickly get distracted and turn to writing a Wikipedia style article tracing its history backwards and forwards a few thousand years.



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20 Dec 2011, 1:30 pm

BrandonSP wrote:
I know the idea that certain cultures are "exotic" is rooted in a perception of difference from one's own background, but as long as you don't rank cultures in a value hierarchy and acknowledge that the people in those cultures are still human beings who need respect I don't see the problem.


I don't know. I don't like when my culture is seen as exotic nothing more than I like when it's seen as dirty/barbaric. They are two sides of the same coin.



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28 Dec 2011, 2:31 pm

I'm currently working on a comic book and a novel. So far the novel doesn't have a single written word, but the comic book has about a fifth of the first draft written, but nothing illustrated yet. It takes quite a while for my thoughts and ideas to evolve into a story.



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02 Jan 2012, 8:22 pm

If you want to get the writing out there you can send your stories to one of the many writing competitions which you can find online. This can be very disappointing when you are rejected time after time but if you learn to expect rejection it can be useful because you have a deadline on which you must finish your story and that deadline can help you progress. I used to put my short stories in for writing competitions and failed to get anywhere and eventually gave up, but then I got a letter and a cheque for £50 through the door for a story I had entered in a competition months before. I had won 5th prize.

I think that Aspie writing can be more original, and in a way more refreshing than NT writing. We have a unique way of looking at the world which is interesting for many people. I am writing my second novel atm. (The first one is sitting in a box, and on a memory stick, unpublished, almost unseen, because there are problems with it that I haven't been able to sort out.)