finished the "main story" B) B)
update on premise: sci-fi, "space-epic". basically centered around a demoted captain getting old. viciously impulsive, like an animal in space. excellent during war-time, a liability in peace. war erupts again (cus of him) and several worlds are plunged into battle against old non-humanoid adversaries. reasons for war are just territory/preemptive-strike-spirit
our space captain hero is however not fit to rule or lead more than small groups, barely that, so the leading character is a redhead desert-chick he's gifted as a part of a crew from some rebel he encounters early on, after messing up big time, triggering war and fleeing his army.
i break the 4th wall about faster than light propulsion and humanoid-existence. this is artistic license. nothing more.
book 1: the war is lost, the "main humanoid ruler planet" is erradicated.
book 2: the allied humanoid planets are re-conquered, "main humanoid ruler planet" is accidentally erradicated again.
book 3: the entire galaxy is colonized and conquered from the enemy non-humanoids, in all 60 livable worlds + barely mentioned number of non-habitable worlds and planetoids.
book 4: enemy aliens are discovered to come from a satellite dwarf galaxy orbiting the milky way, and theyre now shooting supernova triggers into stars. most of the important planets are vaporized. enemy alien world (which turns out to be a "giant neutron star") is blown up. the end.
books:
1. space, stars and bisquits/crackers (titles are in norwegian... like everything else is
)
2. guardians of eternity
3. last voyage of the worlds
4. the white star
a very conclusive end. very conclusive.
NOW.
i saved 1 character that i imagined in the universe (that didnt fit into the main story), plus i always imagined a 4/5 part story. i often did this for comics and stuff, it works nice as a "numeric symbolism" for a sci fi, 4 traditional elements + 5 "the ether"/space.
so
5. is untitled yet, im writing it, and will consist of short stories, each independent, using the characters from 1-4 whenever they're "free from the story", which many of them are for long periods of time + some using the "unused" character, giving them a feeling of a thread.
i will of course make sure there are no conflicts of events, and for this i made a list of all named characters
i have over 300 named charatcers. i f**king rule.
about 5-6 survive, only 1 makes it from beginning and into infinity
*prawd*
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Last edited by ZEGH8578 on 15 Jul 2009, 1:37 pm, edited 4 times in total.
thanx!
added some info in the edit there
but thanx, ive had this idea for ages, ive tried to type it down 3 times before, one time upto 70 pages but i just wasnt ready.
now im clooosing in on my 30's, i dont think im facing THAT much more mental evolution, of course some. but what i wrote when i was 20 embarasses me now
i finished book 1 over a year ago, i check it now, and it still makes me chuckle = good sign!! !
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yay thanx!
if i get any of this published, that would be an achievment equal to actually having spread my genes B)
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