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07 Sep 2010, 12:24 pm
07 Sep 2010, 1:40 pm
07 Sep 2010, 1:48 pm
Well I haven't written the story yet... but when I took it. When it came on everything started getting blurry and I was seeing neon colors. And it was insane I hallucinated outside that I saw this neon castle. It's like EVERYTHING was neon.
So I was going to make a short story about how this kid enters another dimension where its all neon and stuff and everythings trippy. I would call it "Trippy". It would be really cool 
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And what would be even better is the dimension is not only trippy but could be like a mirror dimension where it's the opposite of where he came from.
So what do you think? 
07 Sep 2010, 2:00 pm
07 Sep 2010, 2:10 pm
skafather84 wrote:
danandlouie wrote:
welllllll......my first acid trip was when i was 21, just out of the military. i had not drunk alcohol, not smoked grass, a complete virgin with mind altering things. i was a tabula rosa in all ways also.
the guy who was going to help me said it was genuine owsley lsd. he was going to stay straight so he could watch out for me. good thing he did.
so i took it, tried to smoke the mj, said i didn't realy feel any different, and then everything goes blank. i don't know who i am, where i am, what i am. i am alone in a field with things crawling over my body. i have no fear. light is flashing by. i am caught in the light and lifted up. way up. i am looking down on the planet as it turns faster and faster and suddenly i am moving. sound is rushing by me in huge waves. i am in something . it is all around me with a small opening where light is brilliant. then i am gone again.
i was in a large field, late at night. the light rushing by was the helper trying to talk to me. he finally gets me up just before dawn and into his car where i stick my head out the window as he is driving. lights are the sound waves rushing by. he gets me to his home where i pass out in on his floor.
one of the greatest experiences of my life. would i do it now? no way. my mind set is way to bad to take such a chance. would i recommend it? depends. the personalty variations of humans requires much examination before something like this is undertaken.
so, heavy drip......let us hear it.
the guy who was going to help me said it was genuine owsley lsd. he was going to stay straight so he could watch out for me. good thing he did.
so i took it, tried to smoke the mj, said i didn't realy feel any different, and then everything goes blank. i don't know who i am, where i am, what i am. i am alone in a field with things crawling over my body. i have no fear. light is flashing by. i am caught in the light and lifted up. way up. i am looking down on the planet as it turns faster and faster and suddenly i am moving. sound is rushing by me in huge waves. i am in something . it is all around me with a small opening where light is brilliant. then i am gone again.
i was in a large field, late at night. the light rushing by was the helper trying to talk to me. he finally gets me up just before dawn and into his car where i stick my head out the window as he is driving. lights are the sound waves rushing by. he gets me to his home where i pass out in on his floor.
one of the greatest experiences of my life. would i do it now? no way. my mind set is way to bad to take such a chance. would i recommend it? depends. the personalty variations of humans requires much examination before something like this is undertaken.
so, heavy drip......let us hear it.
Mixing MJ and LSD for a first time with anything? Wow...what a crappy friend. I mean it's great that he played sitter for you (important for almost everyone early-on) but that's like going from being a non-driver to being put into an Indy car and told to try and win a race. Glad it was a good experience despite not exactly being the optimal setup.
As for the acid story: some of the best stories are written by experiences or under the influence of different substances. The only way to find out if it is good or not is to try writing it.
I'll get started on writing it soon. I'm starting rethink whether it should be a short story or a novel. Plus I need a couple notebooks to right in. I have no notebooks.
07 Sep 2010, 3:17 pm
HeavyDrip wrote:
Well I haven't written the story yet... but when I took it. When it came on everything started getting blurry and I was seeing neon colors. And it was insane I hallucinated outside that I saw this neon castle. It's like EVERYTHING was neon.
So I was going to make a short story about how this kid enters another dimension where its all neon and stuff and everythings trippy. I would call it "Trippy". It would be really cool.
And what would be even better is the dimension is not only trippy but could be like a mirror dimension where it's the opposite of where he came from.
So what do you think?
So I was going to make a short story about how this kid enters another dimension where its all neon and stuff and everythings trippy. I would call it "Trippy". It would be really cool
. And what would be even better is the dimension is not only trippy but could be like a mirror dimension where it's the opposite of where he came from.
So what do you think?
Remove the drugs from it, find another word instead of trippy (or any descriptive world for surreal that implies drugs), and make it into a kids' short story/novella.
07 Sep 2010, 5:04 pm
skafather84 wrote:
HeavyDrip wrote:
Well I haven't written the story yet... but when I took it. When it came on everything started getting blurry and I was seeing neon colors. And it was insane I hallucinated outside that I saw this neon castle. It's like EVERYTHING was neon.
So I was going to make a short story about how this kid enters another dimension where its all neon and stuff and everythings trippy. I would call it "Trippy". It would be really cool.
And what would be even better is the dimension is not only trippy but could be like a mirror dimension where it's the opposite of where he came from.
So what do you think?
So I was going to make a short story about how this kid enters another dimension where its all neon and stuff and everythings trippy. I would call it "Trippy". It would be really cool
. And what would be even better is the dimension is not only trippy but could be like a mirror dimension where it's the opposite of where he came from.
So what do you think?
Remove the drugs from it, find another word instead of trippy (or any descriptive world for surreal that implies drugs), and make it into a kids' short story/novella.
I didn't want to make it a child story. I want to right a teen/adult story. But instead of drugs I'm going to use something different. Like magical puffing gas or something. And I am probably going to change the name.
