A song I wrote

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I am little 10,
I am the millions,
I am the underdog,
I am the beaten child,
I am the murdered!

I am the entertained,
I am the tryant,
I am the cheater,
I am the abuser,
I am the murderer!

Finding comfort in my own suffering,
Laughing at yours!
Wanting to die, and wanting to live!
Holding my biggest secrets
Of evil and love!

I am the caregiver,
I am the hero,
I am the deliverer,
I am the activist,
I am the one who cares!

I am the one who leaves,
I am the villian,
I am the one who holds captive,
I am the enemy,
I am the one who hates!

Finding comfort in my own suffering,
Laughing at yours!
Wanting to die, and wanting to live!
Holding my biggest secrets
Of evil and love!

You are the one who dies!
You are the one who kills!
You are the one who hurts!
You are the one who hurts others!
We are so close!

You are the one who dies!
You are the one who kills!
You are the one who hurts!
You are the one who hurts others!
We are so close!

Finding comfort in my own suffering,
Laughing at yours!
Wanting to die, and wanting to live!
Holding my biggest secrets
Of evil and love!

Finding comfort in my own suffering,
Laughing at yours!
Wanting to die, and wanting to live!
Holding my biggest secrets
Of evil and love!

you are a lot of things ..jk ... i like your lyrics ...

"Finding comfort in my own suffering,
Laughing at yours!
Wanting to die, and wanting to live!
Holding my biggest secrets
Of evil and love! "

I think this part most

A bit too much repetition of phrasing for me...but it definitely had thought put into writing it. MNore than I can say about some bands out there.

I will further this by adding some of my own lyrics I suppose.

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Degenerate (Draft)

(Verse 1)
Was it a birthright
To abandon me
What you have created
In your own image
Dispatched counterview
Painful accolade
Pivoting fulcrum
As I walk away

(Bridge)
I shouldn't have to trust an outside force
There should be security within your words
Instead I'm fractured between love and hate
The floods will consume you in obscurity

(Chorus)
Buckling under this weight
Exit routes that I create
Dementia will eat away
Leave me hollow and decomposed

JUST GO!

(Verse 2)
I pledged to support your crusade against fact
Because your treachery is f*****g tact
Paranoia in beliefs resides now
Wish I could make out your brainwave signals

(Bridge)

(Chorus x2)

(Post Chorus Verse)
Tremors that damage
Collars that choke me
Confined to nothing
I'M ALL I AM!
Rebirth of castles
Giving no shelter
God of the jungle
MY SAVAGE SURVIVAL!

(Bridge)

(Some solos)